There are days we feel alone
in a world of isolation,
You can be wealthy ,or in poverty
HE sets forth no segragation.
Weeks you have no monies,
Some hungry to be nourished
He will lead the way,
Riches will somehow be flourished.
Give on to others, as they give onto you;
Grey skies among us,become glorious shades of blue.
Let troubles from out of your heart,
let go and set them free;
Forgive what was said
Emotions in captivity.
Remember the hearts of those who decieve,
There is always good in one's heart
though times its hard to believe.
Your world crumbled and torn apart;
Then times emotion forgets.
Through rough terrain,ask him into your heart
you will feel no regrets.
He was there from the very start
There will be days you experience happiness and pain;
He will guide you through sunshine and dry the rain.
Moments you are giving ,or friends you betray;
He will teach you,and in your heart he'll stay.
Author notes
Just thought I'd write something uplifting...hope you all like it...
Written November 21st, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- Inspiration by RoseBlossom.
300 points, ended June 7, 2004, 19 entries
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This is wonderful! And the best subject in the world for a poem (in my opinion anyhow)... I love the line about emotions in captivity, you hit the nail on the head with that one... anyway, very nicely done!
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This reminds me of Psalms...the litany of faith in the midst of pain and dispair. It is a testament always to man's ability to see beyond...to strive for the "might be". A very encouraging poem.
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that was very uplifting and inspiring. i feel you on that.
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I love reading poems like this that speak with hope. Gtuess that's the optimist in me. Great job! -
thank you for your comment on the poem..I am glad to hear it inspired you :-)
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don't touch it!
i'm so glad i read this today... it is awesome. totally what i needed to hear. look forward to reading some more of your work. -
Thank you..people must think I am odd I write about everything..I do appreciate your comment...
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don't touch it!
amen, amen, and amen... thanks I needed to read this today. YOu have just uplifted my soul.
xxxxx oooooo
Yvonnne
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