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she's just sitting there

she's just sitting there
all of the pain that tortures her
everything terrible happened
her love has now hardened
her features growing tense
she suffers through suspense

the wait of what will occur
shes becoming insecure
her trust growing thinner
she thought she chose the winner
the one for her to love
her angel from above
her wind beneath her wings
her sweetest of things

but they can no longer be
and each other they can no longer see
this pain is unbearable
he thought he had been careful
until it backfired
and their hope expired

and although all might seem lost
and they suffer through exhaust
there is that one glimmer
that hopeful shimmer

that all will be normal once more
and they can be together for sure
and though it might seem slim
she knows she will somehow be with him

Author notes

this is personally one of my saddest poems...
Written May 21st, 2005

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  • ourhouse62
    May 22, 2005
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    thanks but no, its not bout mike thankyouverymuch. but ur poems r so good!!! dont think they're not!


  • ourhouse62
    May 22, 2005
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    thanks my short, german blondy


  • Lostdreams666
    May 21, 2005
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    hahaha jewish homie up there^^ no shes my jewish homie!! lol anyway .... this is an awesome poem. is it about mike?? lol ur a good rhymer anyway ur awesum at poem doings i suck now ...uhhhhh keep it up MY jewish homie

  • all hail shlee
    May 21, 2005
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    freakin awsom keep it up my jewish homie its hella good