Exact my Revenge,
Never Lie,
Fall down on your Knees,
Look at you Cry.
Weak and Pathetic,
Fragile and Thin,
Broken so Easily,
The heart and Skin.
Shifted like Sands,
Shattered in Two,
Deadly and Dangerous
Young, old nor New.
Weak and Fragile,
Pathetic and Thin,
Broken so Easy,
Heart and Skin.
Cold and Slow,
Moving like Ice,
Nothing to Show,
So why the Advice?
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Written May 21st, 2005
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Once again very aggressive phonetics in here. Especially with all the stressed sounds at the beginning of the words, and it also sounds very systematic with the syllables. I especially like the last verse, "nothing to show so why the advice?". Good write.
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