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Laughter/Acrostic

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Laughter is the best medicine you can have
Acting much like a very calming salve.
Unhappiness go away go take a hike!
Giggle and belly laugh as much as you like.
Holla and yell, laugh out loud, come on try it!
Titter and snicker, you’ll enjoy it you must admit.
Everyone needs to add more laughter in their lives
Reckon I’ll make someone laugh, see the enjoyment it gives.

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I read your poems Serenity at the Brook
Heroes
Beneath Schools Veneer
Written May 20th, 2005

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    October 21, 2005
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    very nice poem
    i really enjoyed reading it
    nice flow...
    sorry it didn't win in the contest (lol i didn't win either)

    keep on writing

    Nooni


  • shubs
    October 12, 2005
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    Laughter is the best medicine and just what the doctor ordered by way of a prescription which happens to be your poetic acrostic out here..and I am feeling better already==Shubs


  • suicidal temptation
    May 29, 2005
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    Thanx for commenting on my work, your a nice person and this poem is great, it just brings so much warmth and it's true everyone needs laughter and joy in their lives, but it's just so hard to fing it....anyways great job!~


  • jenelda silver member
    May 24, 2005
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    Thank you Herman, yes, laughter is essential in our lives, we just have to pick ourselves up again, and LAUGH, I find if I get a really funny movie it get's me out of feeling blue. I never stay down for long, I have too much living to do, life is too precious to stay down for long. I'm glad you liked it, may I put you on my favourites? then if we see the other is down, we can kick each other on the butt
    Jenn


  • Prince Charming
    May 24, 2005
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    Fantastic statement in this even fantastic write. Your very right about it We should laugh more. Between my serious writes I have to write some funny ones. Its the Dutch red neck side of me. Your little fun write made me smile so you had your readers laughing and did a fantastic job with that. Very good entry.
    Herman


  • Litlyz1
    May 23, 2005
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    Lol I love laughing! Well I should since I do it all the time...anyway this was was really great as well, I personally liked it better as far as wording and all that goes, but I still loved them both! Great job, thank you for sharing! Shannon P.S. Good luck with both, but I'm sure you won't need it!


  • jenelda silver member
    May 21, 2005
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    HMMMMM Vic, you always laugh, even with your wounded toes!
    when are you gonna stop hurting them? what am I gonna do with you
    Jenn


  • eternalpoet
    May 21, 2005
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    3 stars ***

    Oh.. my life till now has been a lot of laughin.. its in my nature to laugh out at my deeds..mistakes.. and jokes.. laughin is the best medicine.. but stil i cant remain healthy.. funny part of life again...

    nice write.


  • jenelda silver member
    May 21, 2005
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    Darling Jody my AP Daughter, I hope you have Joy and laughter in your life soon my sweet, just know I'm here for you, anytime
    Love your AP Mum..Jenn


  • jenelda silver member
    May 21, 2005
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    Thank you Ed for your wonderful comment, without laughter in our life thigs would look pretty grim. Good to see you back my Friend.
    Jenn


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    May 21, 2005
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    this is a very enjoyable poem to read. It is alot of fun and I totally agree that laughter is the best medicine anyone could ever take. Nice job with the poem.


  • dark-fairy-goddess
    May 21, 2005
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    mum, this is really good. I wish everyone felt like this about laughter. I have been having a hard time laughing lately and I don't know why. I think tonight is the first time I have laughed in quite some time. I know things will change for the better, but I am hoping that they do so sometime soon.... Love ya

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