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Emotional/Acrostic

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Emotions can bring you joy and tears
Many times I’ve cried over the years
Often happy tears, but sometimes sad
Tears of joy that made me feel glad.
I love so deeply from my heart and soul
Only at times I’m very hard to console,
Never do I learn to guard my heart
Always give it away from the start.
Leaving me devastated and in tears.

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Written May 20th, 2005

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  • Janice M Pickett
    October 7, 2005
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    excellent

    I have only been in once in my life. Although I have had much passion. Often the two get muddled up. It's very easy to do. I think ou wrote a great acrostic jen. You talk about emotions which are so common. We all wear our hearts on our sleeve and get hurt over and over.
    Well done my Aussie friend
    Hugs
    Jan


  • Prince Charming
    May 24, 2005
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    I think everybody can identify those feelings. How many times we hurt ourselves after opening our lives. Give all the love we had. Every time we think "never again" still we fall in love again and again. Its the strongest force on earth. The power of love can make you fly and fall. Great beautiful emotions in your write
    herman


  • Litlyz1
    May 23, 2005
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    This was pretty good, and I know how you feel. You portrayed it very well, and the form was well thought out. Great poem! Shannon


  • eternalpoet
    May 21, 2005
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    4 stars ****

    Umm.. i think there is a spelling mistake over there in the last line around.. just please check it out.. it is may be and instead of an.. so may be you should check it out.. and otherwise.. there are lot more emotions then tears.. yeah?