You will always be there
But there is not here with me
Where is there if not here
Here’s where I want you to be
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I commented on the Beginning, and Moment
Written May 20th, 2005
A contest entry
- Wow Me! by Malkolis.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 24 entries
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it may be short, but i like it alot. and there is more feeling in lees words...-nichole-
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awesome
this is extremely short but you have expressed your feelings in less words than i could think of. it shows lots of emotion even tho it is short. i enjoyed it. -
This is very short ,but it shows alot of emotion to one you love with just a few words.Keep Going.
Brandy3 -
A good message within the lines of this poem..wonderfully done..take care~
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very nice
Short and sweet. The play on words sounded great. People may look at this and say "ah, short and simple", but it truly does take talent to make words fit and flow as you do. Very nice.
Emily -
I must say, perfectly titled. With so few words you managed to convey a swirl of emotion that I believe many can relate to. I know I certainly can. Well done!
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very short but so very powerful, i loved it.
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great
short but great. -
Amazing!!!!!!! I love it!
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i can relate
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