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Ruse (A blind eyes fate)

Life's greatest ruse
is what comes there after
when voices cease and darkness comes
and sweet death ends the laughter.

Life is wasted
theorizing what's to come.
God's white light or
night eternal,
to where our souls succumb.

The only truth you'll come to find
far beyond the stars
is nothings there, live here forever,
trust in who you are.

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Written May 20th, 2005

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  • smosher
    November 29, 2006
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    this was really good i likes it a lot.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    October 9, 2006
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    Excellant lol/sensuous

    A very good write indeed. I like it just as it is. For a slightly different view on the subject you might like to read my poem: Bridges. I had an unusual spiritual experience after his death.