To have a father
Whom is Dutch
and a Redneck too
How would it be
of course funny for you
My daddy is a one of a kind
He'd make ya laugh most of the time
He's caring and gentle understanding too
A down to earth type, clear to his soul
A man of many talents, waiting to be told
Embarrassing you always, and he's enjoyed it too
Making your face as red as the sky can be blue
Making sure you grow into a sweet young woman
but one whom can punch out the jerk drinking Bourbon
Having this Dutch Redneck Daddy
Is any girls dream.
He'll always make you laugh
and bust out at the seems.
Author notes
I am without a father, cause he's somewhere out of the United states. I haven't seen him in almost 30 yrs.
So I wrote how it would be to have a dutch redneck daddy
Written May 20th, 2005
A contest entry
- Father Figure by Prince Charming.
300 points, ended May 21, 2005, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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congratulations on you bronze a well deserved win, i enjoyed it immensely
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It sounds like your talking about me here LOL No this was absolute great done You brought such a great smile on my face. What it would be like to have a Dutch Redneck as dad you should give that question to ponytails2 she's my daughter. But I know a turn her red sometimes I have a talent for doing silly things.
On the other hand your write made me sad To read that you are searching for your dad must be awfull. To miss a dad in your life. Somebody to turn to. Because I know you have a million and one questions for him. I just do the only thing I can do Pray that you find him someday.
Hugs Herman
ps Not much spelling errors found, but what would you think I am Dutch i probely would have seen it. If there would stand male on my mailbox I could tell whats wrong with that :-)
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