apart from the cruel unreal world
when all alone i try to heal
your memory strikes into my mind
and even more restless then i feel
Why do i have to remember you
why cant i ever forget you
my nights are restless they keep me awake
darkness getting dark hurts and creeps
within which my pitiful and broken soul
unknown to the world cries and weeps
why does it have to hurt me
why cant it ever leave me
every breath that i take reminds me of you
and hence my own breath becomes a burden
which i am forced to take as a pain
getting worse each moment and harden
why does keep going my breath
why cant i depart from my breath
of all the pains you have given me
WHY DO I STILL LOVE YOU?????
Author notes
well this is surely straight from a broken heart....when you know no matter how hard we try there is something that can never change
A contest entry
- Love....anything about love!!!!! by SouthernBelle09.
300 points, ended September 10, 2005, 42 entries
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very well written and very heartfelt
Keep on writing
I enjoyed reading it... i think i felt like that before... -
this is really good,ive wondered the same thing..some people cause you so much pain and you just want to forget them,but you cant and still love them,and that really hurts,but you did a great job at expressing that ~Laura
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this is very heartfelt and i know how u feel. i do.
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nicely written
I can definitely put myself in your situation. I have been through that. I have felt those things. I promise there is hope, true love is out there, but I know that doesn't lessen what you feel now. Thank you for sharing this. It's very well written. Make sure to let me know who you commented on.
Krista
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