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No, But Maybe

You came so close to telling the truth, but then you didn't. You almost made me forgive you, but suddenly i didn't. You were almost able to make me laugh, then something happened and i didn't. You come so close every time. You almost made me "love" you again. You were so close, but no. I wont let it happen. I'm going to take all the bad stuff you have done and use it to cover the good stuff up. I'm just hoping the good stuff wont change the way i feel. But if there is good stuff to hide does that mean that it was put there to hide. Maybe not. Maybe i will give you another try.

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Written May 20th, 2005

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  • CountryLullaby
    May 22, 2005
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    thanks you! it was truthful(unfourtunatly) i wish he would go away and stop confusing me!lol thankx though


  • CountryLullaby
    May 22, 2005
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    thank you so much!! it really makes me feel good!! thankx


  • dark-dreams
    May 21, 2005
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    wow..interesting...and confusing
    lolz

    really...the whole poem is about confusion...and it makes the readers so confused (well me anyway lol)

    great affect =]
    and hope ur not so confused anymore

    nice poem

    Xxgina_


  • DarlingStac
    May 20, 2005
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    i know exactly what your feeling now... 100 %... im just as confused as you.. but maybe more.. cuz hes crawling all over me.. sawing that he loves me and hes coming back that we will be together...its just like ugh?... this was a great poem.. xoxo stac

  • Sweet Summer Rose
    May 20, 2005
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    CASETY!!! if you are talking about "Georgia" ( that his new name) lol... no never again willyou give him a chance.. forget it really, for et him.. find someone new(????) love you bunches, and I don't want to see you hurt.great poem


  • CountryLullaby
    May 20, 2005
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    awww hun thankx!!! i hope we will find that guy!! i love you SO much!!!!!

  • c-town nena617
    May 20, 2005
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    This is such a truthful piece graet job you made the poem flow great job!

  • x PassionateKisses
    May 20, 2005
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    Girl, this is really good. But if it is about you know who, don't give him the time of day! You and I both know it's not worth it. He has hurt us way to much..and you know it. And you know he has those smooth ways that make you feel like what he is saying to you is true. And its not, cause he says it to everyone else too! It's okay, we will find you a boyfriend that treats you like you are suppose to be treated and not one that does nothing but LIE! I love you so much girl. Don't get caught up in this sh*t again....♥ Shelby


  • bluidbabiegirl
    May 20, 2005
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    Awww, babie....this is really good!!!

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