Eyes so brown that I melt
Like milky smooth chocolate
When I look in them
Everyday
Nose so smooth that
I could make my index and middle finger become
A skiier that could slide down it
As a beginner
Lips so rosy and soft that if
I put a petal to your lips
I couldn't tell which
Is which
Hair so black that
The night pales to it
Glimmering when the light hits it
In just the right way
Arms and torso so protective that the
Soft black hairs that cover them
Blanket me gently at night
And keep me warm
Legs so strong and firm that
Can run to me quickly
If harm came to me
In anyway
A laugh so infectious that whenever
I hear it I smile and
Any woe that I had quickly
Melts away
A mind so intelligent that I
Feel childish hearing so many different things
But I learn so much that I
Really don't mind
A heart so pure that can
Share feelings and emotions of such depth
That I only heard of
In fairy tales
A love so strong that
Would be a shoulder when I cry
And behind me through sucess
And failure
A person so perfect that
God must have taken a little more time
And thought long and hard before
Planting the seed onto Earth
A person so perfect that
Fits like a jigsaw puzzle piece
The piece that you search all over for
In a 10,000 piece puzzle
A person so perfect that I
Would have to be truly blessed to have
And I would know better than to ever let
Someone like that go
A person so perfect who will
Sit next to me the rest of my life
And spend forever with me
And our family.
My perfect person
Would be you, my love.
Author notes
This is pretty obviously about my boyfriend 
Written May 19th, 2005
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WOAH KEL!!!! Great job girly, sounds like you got yourself a cutie!!!!
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Thank you for commenting on "Get Over You" I really appreciated it and feel free to read my other poems.
I like how you take each body part and descibe what they make you see in your mind because it shows that you love them in every single way.
This poem really makes it sound as if you have truly found a perfect person.
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glad you found him and are enjoying the fruits of your long search,....lol
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this is really sweet! It's so full of imagery...And now you've showed that your perfect person can really exist. This was brilliantly done, good images and nice flow. Thanks for sharing and entering and good luck!
~Lana
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oh, that is so sweet!!
how sweet is that?? i love the imagary--it's so well described i can see that guy standing in front of me!! is he real? if he is it sounds like you love him so much ^^. good luck with the contest-- I have such good competition!! *_*
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one additional note though, if i were you, i might change the title, it is almost generic, it would be better if it were a little more interesting, odd person that i am, i would change it to something like "Homo Sapien (sp?) Perfection" lol
i dont know, just the title does the poem no justice
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that was BEAUTIFUL, very very well done, he sounds perfect lol, my favorite description was the lip one, nice job!
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