dead bodies
bloods floodin the street
i'm knuckin in the pig-pen with mud on my feet
come at me...
take a step in my general direction
and you'll need some physical correction
fuck guns
i pack razors and collect your skin
there's nothin happy 'bout me
so check your grin
on the side i lift weights
no curls for girls
i work trycepts
my force will make you earl
cough up blood
sneeze up lungs
feel the hurt
and if that all fails then the steal will work
bustin shots
damn, it really makes you feel big
real big, it makes you feel on top of the world
just like - breaking your jaw and gettin top from your girl
i like emberrasing dudes
in front of their ladies
and i won't hesitate if you look at me shady
you'll wish you kept your eyes down
or fuckin obeyed me
cause i'll eat a niggers legs and use his blood as my gravy
no joke... my rage flares, i disengage hairs
my men comin through cause they gettin paged there
and we ride or die, just like the movies
we sneak up with bats or we strike with uzis
i love the blood, you kids don't even know what pain is
but i'll be glad to teach
this shit is fuckin heinous...
Author notes
FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Written May 19th, 2005
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Let me think....Hmm... Oh, yes. First off, it has good imagery. oh and three words...
~You Got Skill!!~
~Jazzy
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no blood, just gore!!! haha, my friend says t
very nicely written... im likin the anger
i like angry poems... and this fits the description!!! i love it... imma book mark it... and i wont die from heat, dont worry... lmao... good job!
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Luv the imagery
Emotion indeed
...pent up anger ...tighter than a spring...
Spiff imagery...excellent job on conveying the frustration and fury. You really gave such a "feel" with this one... made me think of how consuming our emotions can be and the recklessness and uncaring attitude of hate -
This was a very well written peice. Alot of raw emotion. Ill pay you to be my body guard, lol. Great write .
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cause i'll eat a niggers legs and use his blood as my gravy
^^ your white arent you? lol
it was good...
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sick fuckin shit
ANd Lith. once again bro you did so fuckin sick yo I haven't been around in a bit but I miss readin your shit yo I'm doin pretty good here my bro hasn't turnd the cable on at my house yet so I have no internet SBC is gay cause its all hooked up even the phones are down.... anyways I really miss chattin please email me at cali_girl_nlove@yahoo.com so I can check it at the library anyways dude nice fuckin poem this was the shit I applauded it...
and we ride or die, just like the movies
we sneak up with bats or we strike with uzis
i love the blood, you kids don't even know what pain is
but i'll be glad to teach
this shit is fuckin heinous...
BEST FUCKIN LINES YOU SHOULD PUT THIS INA CONTEST... LOL FUCK YEAH!
anyways much juggalette love...
Kimpossible
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I must say this was graphic and just plain awesome. I must say I loved the part:
"cough up blood
sneeze up lungs
feel the hurt
and if that all fails then the steal will work"
I haven't read any of your stuff in a LONG LONG time, but this was great
. And to think you can be all nice and shit. hehe
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damn lith, i'd never wanna be on the recieving end of your hate........i love this tho, makes me wanna rip something (or someone) apart, awesome job
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Niiiiiiice.
How I feel bout now.
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Haha, now that's the shit I'm talking about right there. some hardcore gutter shit that'll make somebody vomit type shit. I love it.
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noice~~lol
This is a deep poem, very scary, it's tight like my recent one, it's called The Murderer, check it out, please! aNYWAYS NICE WRITE,keep it up, u write with true emotions, noice
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