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Superstar Paparazzi status

SUPERSTAR PAPPARZI STATUS

Have you read the papers
Checked the news?
Somehow now I’m walking in hot shoes
This is great but in a strange twisted kind of way
Let’s all go find the free speech sandbox today

Now A MOD seems to think
That Kryspin’s personal will power
Has gone down the sink
Well perhaps he should read
Between the thick eye brows (insert crossed eyed face imagery here)

Viva La Révolution mes chères Amis!
Young Spin has been Spun
By adults and opinions
Tearing like cutting onions
I think I hear the violins!

To all my fans and friends,
Thanks for your support
Without you there would be
No honest retort
I give you my card
We’ll do lunch
And a photo op publicity brunch

Author notes

allpoetry.com/poem/1268726 -
ogreatbaldone’s poem “Nor will I”

allpoetry.com/Poem/1266885 -
poetryality’s poem “we will not concede”

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hey wait a minute! i do nobody's bidding
! I'll be vocal if I please, I like to see both sides- sometimes information gets skewed but I can accept criticism and debate - as debate should be free of emotion..lets not mistake passion for emotion.

attacking me? where'd this come from? wasn't that almost uncalled for? HOW EXCITING in a twisted way.

some feud? well be prepared! en guard.. rofl
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(taken from ogreatbaldone's poem)...

My border has already been breached, as expected.
Young Kryspin now does your bidding.
to assume to give me an order is laughable
as is the thought that I would ever flee
------
taken from poetryality's retort)

Kyrspin is our scout
She has sought you out
She just has to shout
You'll be surrounded about

Written May 19th, 2005

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  • kryspin
    May 24, 2005
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    i have a personality alright...it might be a disorder

    heheh i have me ways

  • Phrozen
    May 24, 2005
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    Such spirit! I can feel the personality in the words. w00t!

    Phrozen


  • Blkwidow77 silver member
    May 22, 2005
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    Well... You've really got your panties all in a bunch! How fun! Will you be able to sleep at all tonight? LOL This is too much! But press on, this is really great.

    Ever read the novel by Tanith Lee "The Gods Are Thirsty"? Wow. It just smacks of that soo much! ^0^

  • Little Midnight
    May 22, 2005
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    This poem was different.

    I like the imagery of the second to last stanza.


  • Unbridled1
    May 21, 2005
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    oh my, people acting up again! WHERE WILL IT END???? HAHAHA!

    i like this response to the obvious arrogance...how absurd.
    Go get 'em, Kry!


    UB


  • SimplyTheTruth
    May 21, 2005
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    I liked this a lot. It hooked you from the first word and kept you raptured on the poem all the way to the end. Excellent job.


  • kryspin
    May 21, 2005
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    thank you so much for checking this out! i made sure to send him this link in playful glee

  • Silvrwolf
    May 21, 2005
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    Wow. This really should put the OGreat??baldone in his rightful place. Who the hell does he think he is anyway ?? I hope he gets it straight that we the poets support this site and to get rid of us is to cut Allpoetry's throat.


  • a7ebech eini
    May 20, 2005
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    This flew above my head, wow I am really not comprehending anything to day, I promise to reread it tomorrow so that I can leave a real comment

  • kryspin
    May 20, 2005
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    oh im as dangerous as my digital shoes!

  • kryspin
    May 19, 2005
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    thank you so much
    if y'ever need anything let me know


  • poetryality silver member
    May 19, 2005
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    I think you know what you must do my dear, next issue of SPINDICATED promises to be the BOMB! LOL Great responde. I am glad he thinks you are a threat! You just may well be my love. Goo going!


  • Venessa
    May 19, 2005
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    lol go get em

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