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I didnt mean.

Alone,Bored out of my mind
Trying to look at the bright side of things
But everyone left me behind
maybe, im the one who is wrong
I've kept my thoughts inside
for way too long.
I should have let you in,
feel what I feel, see what i see
Maybe it is my fault
Your not here with me
I didnt,and still dont want you gone
But I didnt know how to say how I was feeling
that second, that minute of that very day
I didnt mean to say what I did
It was just my way.

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Written May 19th, 2005

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  • Slit My Soul
    July 3, 2005
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    i liked this one. it made me wonder if i could have changed things with this guy if i would hvae let him see things from my point of view more often and said what i was feeling...anyways this was a great write.
    *Slit My Soul*

  • LadyJane
    July 3, 2005
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    We say somethings sometimes when we don't mean to. Then, it's too late to take back the words. This is good, and I can tell its from your heart.
    Abby

  • Boo-Boo
    June 8, 2005
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    shorty that was good you expressed your feelings and i see what you sayin....kep it up homie mucho love


  • XxAmeliaxX
    May 24, 2005
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    YAMSS!!!!!!!!!!!

    Well my lovely,
    I really much, very alot, time infinity, about more then ever, have a great emotion, passion, and LOVE for this freaking p-o-e-m.. And!!!, yes there is more, its so FREAKING creepy how much i love this. Like i could picture myself righting like this! Man, damn..jessica, you out did your self with this one. i love it Alot! Top rule!!!! (ja rule is ugly..) But yeah, great job.
    Your not here with me
    I didnt,and still dont want you gone
    But I didnt know how to say how I was feeling
    that second, that minute of that very day
    I didnt mean to say what I did
    It was just my way.
    thats my favorite part..makes me think of you know who whom i dont want to talk about ..great job though!! Adios mu cha cha!!
    Love ALWAYS- memily bee-itch!!


  • Squat
    May 19, 2005
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    aww! this is soooo good! i loved it! your such a good writer..i hate you! lol. i love the technique you used for this. keep up the awesome work. cuz you know im here to read and to always talk to awesome awesome awesome!

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