I've known you for so long,
why do you cast me aside,
when the new girl comes along?
We used to do everything together,
we were practically inseperable.
Now you go with her and leave me on the side lines.
I'm lonely, I'm excluded and I'm hating every second.
Acknowledge me, pay me some attention please.
I'm jealous and I'm hating every second of it.
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Copyright 2005
Written May 18th, 2005
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Neon Lights.
300 points, ended October 28, 2005, 20 entries
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Very nice! Short and right to the point! Love it! This happens to so many people and it really annoys me....there's no need to ditch someone because someone new comes along. Awesome job. Thanks for entering and good luck!
~Fi~
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I've been here before too. Friends can be very hurtful when new people come along. They just toss you aside like yesterday's news. Most of the time though they'll realize what they've lost and come back to you. Hope it goes well. Keep writting!
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Hey! I know who this is bout and don't worry bout it! I know that things will work out and if it doesn't(which it will) then it's her loss that she can't see what a great fun person u r!
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aww...
i know who dis is about, too. dont be sad. she likes u alot, trust me 
. very nice poem tho. a good mix of emotions . keep dis good shit up 
miss u heaps!!
luv pmatilda xxx -
lol go kate who is this about?
luv always
mad
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Yeah a friend of mine did this too me too. Freaking loser. So I killed her.. Went to her house with a blade..
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I can relate
I feel the exact same way right now. One of my guy friends and I use to be inseperable and now we barely ever talk because he's all caught up with this one girl and i'm soooo very jealous of her. As soon as she came along he pushes me aside to hang with her. it really hurts my feelings because I have a huge crush on him. but anyways i really like this poem. keep it up.
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