Your love I remember like a dream.
Your face I see, that picture so old, burned in my mind.
Your happiness I remember, basking in it with glee.
I remember every moment spent with you.
How we happily danced in lost fields even apart.
Your eyes in my mind, we gazed deeply into each other.
Of your lips did I happily partake and you of mine.
Oh precious bodies, we held each other tight.
And now every moment replays in my mind.
A cold record of warmest thought.
The happiest feelings for you and now I am freezing.
I love you still and always will and it hurts.
I cry, I scream, I die, I try.
Sobbing drops me to my crimson knees.
I am wracked with tears, pain, sadness.
What we had dissipates like breath on the icy morn.
I swing my sword as I always did.
The blade so hard, so shiny, it would be so easy.
I live minute by minute and every second lasts a year.
Oh light! The pain, oh light it hurts!
I am here now with no one by my side.
Thoughts of you still abide.
No comfort is given me, and I die by inches.
And through it all with my gasping breath I whisper, 'I love you!'
Author notes
For Skye. Category: Whithering away.
Written May 18th, 2005
A contest entry
- I'd Be Your Anything by cherish60.
300 points, ended June 30, 2005, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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great job
omg this was sooo good. i really like the last two lines. great job. thanks for entering and good luck! -
woah! i love this, its so intense! really amazing work.
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Only one comment? Doesn't seem right! A very heartfelt write, I loved the emotion you put into this, I could feel your struggle. And I know how you feel and so I could relate. Good job!
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Danny? Are you okay, koibuto?
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