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Never go away Alone

(tribute to Cat Stevens)

Beautiful eyes, nothing is disquised
Forehead so bare, so fore is naked sweep of back

Head back, black coal eyes... lit by heart
smoldering, growing, gathering soul

~anger despised, reviled, revisited~

angry strum, dissonant peaceful detachment
spirit peels off, suffocating market quotes

grow the children, love the wife, let it all go
planet lives, planet dies, one man watches it all

~on the peace train~

I feel the power growing in my hair


(not complete)

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Written May 18th, 2005

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  • Congruence
    August 14, 2005
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    Another excellent piece, I really like the way you set up your words and flow and the way the two actually work together. You have a great style, very individual.