butterflies kisses and blue specals flies nothing compared with the love in your eyes soft and sweet in every way i thank the lord for this very first day i like you from the bottm of my heart never do i want two apart nothing more do i want out of this life than to bring you happines to share my hugs and kisses too what im trying to say is i love
you!
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Written May 18th, 2005
A contest entry
- PAY IT FORWARD....again by Thedragonisgone.
300 points, ended October 30, 2006, 59 entries
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This is lovely write.
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Hi sweety, thanks so much for entering this contest. It's such a sweet poem. I'm wondering who it's for. I would suggest though to start a new line with the next thought. For instance:
"butterflies kisses and blue specals flies
nothing compared with the love in your eyes soft and sweet
in every way i thank the lord for this very first day"
and so on. It easier to read that way and has better flow for the readers eye to follow.
Just a thought. Keeping this way is certainly your decision as it is with any author. I am honored that you would share such sentiment with me. -
Hmm.... the only word I can come up with is "cute". LOL. This is really good kiddo. And it makes everyone go "awww..." so yeah...good write.
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Another Great One
OH! It's so cool! And sweet, short, and to the point! Another good piece!
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a sweet little love poem that you have here, this is one lucky person, if its real to have you in there life, it was just beautiful, keep at it -david-
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*sniffs* oh erin...*sobs*...i love you too! *pulls self together* okay this was sweet. i loved it keep up the good work.
desdamona2000 -
love the poem it is so sweet
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It was sweet.I like your form of writting it's different.Butterfly kisses is a good title also.Love poems are the best at times.This is good.
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It was pretty good. Very sweet with heartfelt intent. I liked it, good job.
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A sweet and innocent sort of poem but it has a special emotion in it that is simply lovely. It flows pretty well with the bits of rhymes. Best wishes... ~genielassie~
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Nice poem, you should consider putting this in stanzas but other than that a very simple and quaint poem that is beautiful.
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BEAUTIFUL!
Awwwwwwwww how sweet! This is such a nice write to butterflies. They really are beautiful creatures, aren't they?
You have a loving heart and it shows it your writing.
Never stop doing that.
God bless!
Brian -
OMG!! I just gotta say that this was sooo beutiful!! and it's just so sweet and romantic and any other wonderful word!! I feel this way no kidding it's like me talking except I didn't have your amazing talent of putting it into words great!!!
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Sweet
*Butterfly Kisses?" Awwwww...so sweet!
<3 Nichole -
that's very cute!
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This was a sweet poem. It is a beautiful way to express your love to someone! I'm sure they will like it! Keep up the good work!
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this is the worst poem ive EVER read! no im just playin that poem rocked!
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Awesome!
Beautiful. Simple and Beautiful. Very nice job. You may want to consider arranging your poem in lines and stanzas. It would make it easier to read. -
*claps* Good job!
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thats a cute poem ....hehe
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LOVELY
This is beautiful.
Very lovely!
Writing about butterflies and love makes a great combo.
I hope you do more of it.
Thanks for sharing this. I'm proud of you.
God bless!
Brian
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