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What would you do

What Would You Do:

If she came to you and
said...

"It's all or never..

Would you drop everything
to be with her.

OR

Would you have to sit back
and think for a minute.

What Would You Do:

It she told you that
you had no time
to think about it.

Would you answer right
away and follow your
heart.

OR

Would you let your mind
take over your heart.

What Would You Do:

When she whispers
"I LOVE YOU"

Would you run away

OR

Would you grab her
and hold tight.

WHAT WOULD YOU DO.......


Yvonne J. Griffin
11/19/02

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Written November 19th, 2002

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  • Leance
    June 5, 2003
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    Nicely done..........all the what ifs in the world......we always seem to live this way forgetting that we may not even be here tomorrow so the what ifs will never happen.....great writing......
    makes you stop and think about a few things in life.........thanks
    lisa anne


  • budlem
    January 17, 2003
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    don't touch it!

    YES! I would drop everything.....and be with her....and stay with her...forever. It's my true story! Thanks for the poem!!!


  • Nam
    January 17, 2003
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    neutral

    I wouldn't do a thing, but that is me.
    A nice piece here.

    :)


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 20, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Take the chance...you may not get another and you won't know if you don't try. Excellent Write, Bravo!

  • BlackWolf
    November 20, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I Would Hold Her And Never Let Her Go....
    'Whyzie'


  • Rubee
    November 19, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Wow.. very good question for man or woman!!! sometimes we think about it a little too long and take the chance of missing out on something very special...a fantastic write Yvonne!!! It really makes a person give it some serious thought :)

  • Sweet Hart
    November 19, 2002
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    neutral

    I really really love this poem. When I read it I thought of myself, I am like the person that the poem talks about, I ask a lot of questions and always say what would you do. Good write!

    ~!~ Kerri ~!~


  • georgie
    November 19, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    this one really got to me. a very meaningful write.
    hugs
    xxx

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