Tender hands begin to mould
the forbidden secrets of her breast
as fiery sparks emerge
from within her nipple's soul.
Her virgin eyes light up in flames
as feelings of shock resurrect
from the pleading depths of her eyes
as she becomes a new found friend to love.
Her heart screams out in lustful passion
her mind becomes a blank verse
that soars upon the curtain of the wind,
and as she rides the waves of bliss
she looks deep into her lover's soul
as his name , a gentle whisper
Caresses her scarlet lips.
Author notes
Written May 18th, 2005
A contest entry
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I like this poem, it's passionate and well written. I especially like the last line. Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
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Very well written ! I really liked this =] Beautifully written. I loved it. Thank you so much for entering & good luck to you with everything ! ♥
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Wow! This is so passionately beautiful! Is that how it was for you? Just curious? Nicely written!
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Beautiful
I love how you captured the softer images of "passion" lol and didn't corrupt it, but kept its aesthetic beauty. The imagery is wonderful. I enjoyed reading this. keep up the good work!
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This poem is pretty good but I think its walking a very fine line in what I had said. It may not be entirely appropriate for anybody of any age to read.
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Thanks for your honest comment.Had me laughing there for a while though,yeah....I hope your first time is like that!
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Incredible
... I am speechless. This is a great piece... indescribably beautiful, yet simple.
This part:
"her mind becomes a blank verse
that soars upon the curtain of the wind,
and as she rides the waves of bliss
she looks deep into her lover's soul
as his name , a gentle whisper
Caresses her scarlet lips."
is phenominal. They light, airy way that the words flow perfectly describes what I would imagine is the perfect first time. I hope mine is like that! LOL!
In any case, this is one that I will probably read many times. Thank you!
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