Illusions,
shadows
on the wall,
passing one
after another...
The purpose
unknown...
-funny girl-
Author notes
Written May 18th, 2005
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A succinct, thoughtful and intelligent write, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Well done.
Bill
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thanks
short but sweet hey, good luck in my contest -
One presupposes that all things likely have a purpose. Likely all things have inertia. They may have had a purpose once or may have a purpose at some time in the future. Less we were to believe that some things simply are and accept the unlikelyhood of existance without purpose. Perhapse the simple purpose for that without it's own purpose is for us to ponder on it. And this would restore order to the world with universal purpose model of the universe. Either way, it's always fun to ponder the possibilities. Thought provoking write. Well done.
Peace,
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Certainly depth in the simplicity of your words.. a gem.
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Short and simple, it makes it so you have to read it twice...and then are still tempted to read it over again. How can so few words say so much? I got great images from this peice. I loved how you ended it.
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this is great i love it
great job
HOPPER
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WoW! That speaks volumes in just one sentence! Kudo's to you! That was fiya hot! but I just let my hands do the talking (clap, clap)
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I love this, it reminds me of Plato's Allegory of the Cave.
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!
Keep Feelin' Fascination,
~Tiffany~
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