scream so you don't feel the pain
As i cut you away
Fall as your senses
Fade to grey
Goodbye my love, goodbye
You killed me for the last time
and this time i mean it
I won't be smothered by your reasons
I won't be caught between it
Goodbye my love, goodbye
watch me hit the wall
and laugh so it seems nothings wrong
it's insane
And there's no rhythm to which i belong
I won't scream
You won't cry
Goodbye
Goodbye my love
It was a lovely ride
Goodbye my love
You can't hurt me with your lies
Scream, but i don't hear a word
You never listened to me anyway
i watch as you scramble for the pieces
scattered by the way
Goodbye my love goodbye
I will be the worst lesson
That you ever learned
I will be the last one
That love burns....it burns for you
Goodbye my love goodbye
Watch me hit the wall
And laugh so it seems nothing's wrong
It's insane
And there is no rhythm to which i belong
I won't scream
You won't cry
Goodbye
Goodbye my love
It was a lovely ride
Goodbye my love
You can't hurt me with your lies
Cause I'm not here
You forced me to fall numb
So scream out loud
As you run
Away...away...away
Goodbye my love, goodbye
Author notes
so gentle hands become so violent
Written May 17th, 2005
A contest entry
- Sad, Depressed, Angry, Mad by YearoftheSerpent.
300 points, ended May 19, 2005, 9 entries
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thanks :-) i'm glad you understood it. I always fear my point is lost somewhere lol
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wow, this was a really great poem, i actually really do understand hown u were feeling when u wrote this, like..wow i just loved it, great job
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why thank you :-), glad you enjoyed it
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!...i love this...true felt emotion in this peice...keep it up..
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