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in your eyes

o world
wrap me in your beauty
shroud me in your lies
surround me in the soft caress
of nature in your eyes

o love
control me in your ease
take over my timid mind
cusion me from deadly falls
but never one to find

o fear
prevent me from my searching
control my reckless deeds
stop me from picking flowers
only to find weeds

o change
bind me tighly to the movement
dont let me run to stay
hold me quick and dont let go
and make me go away

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Written May 17th, 2005

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