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Bring Back That Shining Sun

as she sits there and wonders...why am i alone
the world doesn't understand her
and she thinks she has gone unknown

but the truth of the matter is
she hasn't found that one
who will treat her with respect
and bring back that shining sun

so please god I'm begging you
give her a friend and a love
she deserves it more than anyone
and again she'll soar like a dove

a beautiful graceful creature
she definitely has always been
so i cant see why anyone
would pass up a chance to begin

a life with her and everything she does
shes perfect, you know, its true
she can make you smile at any time
and you just don't have a clue

Author notes

yep i wrote this a few weeks ago...not wonderful or anything but i mean it. anyways...just about a friend that i love dearly.anyways...comment if you read.
Written May 17th, 2005

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  • ImNotOkay0670
    August 28, 2005
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    yaaaay i like this one and you are a wonderful friend to do this, you are perfect and i love you forever <3

  • MyHeavenTonight
    May 31, 2005
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    lol i read this a long time ago, i guess i just didnt have time to tell you what a good friend you are to write something like this youre wonderful karina, i for one am incredibly greatful to have you for my bestfriend because you really are the best anyone could ever ask for XOX
    --katie--

  • ImNotYourStar21
    May 17, 2005
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    i think it is awsome. and i love u so much karina. u are an awsome writter and a fucking great friend. keep up0 the awsome work~Laura~