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Void Of Helplessness

Moving on day by day
trying to calm my mind today
thoughts spinning around never seeming to slow
How can I just stop this now?
How can I break away from this void?

Moving on day by day
Trying to see the reason for me
confused and lost wandering down this road
How can I yell out? How can I show you the fear in me?
When not a single sound comes out of my lips...

Moving on day by day
trying to remember what made me this way
pain and anger
depression and hate
formed in the child of curiosity

Revealing the thing so much can do
I know because that is me...

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Written May 17th, 2005

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  • Poetic Guardian
    May 19, 2005
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    Im sweet on the outside Dearl. Im talking about what goes on within me. But thanks...that helps. ~smiles~


  • Gelu unus gold member
    May 18, 2005
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    great write chris but for those of us who know you we know that you are a sweeter person than that