the sun shines on the lonely desert road,
a stranger walks on,with not a single load,
not worried what he is destined,not worried where fate lies,
no remembrance of where he belonged,
as he walks on towards the golden skies.
he has no anger,he has no pain,
he is neither in anguish, nor disdain,
he has no woes in his empty soul,
he has no enthusiasm, his steps never on a roll.
but he still walks on,
with no fear of what destiny could take,
he never ever stops,
he is neither asleep, nor awake.
for a man as dedicated as thee
never looking back to the times he leaves,
and never wondering what is fore lone,
i can only say,'carry on,carry on'
Author notes
this is my first time
Written May 17th, 2005
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thanx a lot and yes i'm new here. Could you tell me how to go about it?
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if you post a poem here we will more than likely leave comments here. either way, your poem is really good. are you new at writing or new here? anyways, good write.
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Voicing ones thoughts through poetry is like a ballerina pirouetting - across her stage enjoying the symphony within. Some will understand and/or sense an understanding. Others just see and feel the poetry behind and between the vocabularies. Going with the flow of your write was a pleasure. Very good “deep” write! Thank you so much for sharing your words with all of us here. I see you are new to this site - I would like to say – Welcome
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