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writing

writing...
i wish writing was easy
as easy as loving you

writing...
i wish that my writing could express how much i love you
how much i wanna be with you
how much i wanna meet you
how much i wanna just feel your tender touch

writing...
i wish i could tell you exactly how i feel in writing
i wish i could write well enough to show you how i felt


(hope your happy with the new poem
u know who u are )

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Written May 16th, 2005

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  • BabyMia
    May 26
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    yay

    I love you, because after so many years ago this poem was writen for me, were still together<3


  • spamwitch
    June 14, 2005
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    I don't know you guys but it looks like an attempt to write for your woman, and if I'm wrong, I'm going to be really embarrased, but it was really cute if I was right. Well done.


  • BabyMia
    May 17, 2005
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    HEY! yes iam happy with my new Poem :-). I love you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your Baby ~!~Mia~!~