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Fire Of My Unshed Tears

Fire burns in my eyes

It makes me want to cry

And I wonder how anyone

could possibly do something

so insanely idiotic

So utterly stupid and cowardly

I wonder how such scum

could walk on this earth

and people just adapt to it

So filled with rage and tears as I am

I can't imagine how this could happen

After so much pain, after so much energy

used for more important things through life

how could this happen?

I can only sit here with stinging eyes

and wish for the most deserving tortures

for the one who caused such pain and upset

for the one who had almost caused a death

of one so dear to so many hearts

I sit here and wonder, alone, silent...

lost in my own rage and bitter unshed tears

and even now, I ramble when the message is so clear

It shouldn't be this damned long...

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Written May 16th, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 21, 2005
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    I love you just as much, mom. You are always in my heart and thoughts.

  • Princess Muse silver member
    May 21, 2005
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    You know you brought tears to my eyes with this write...I hope you understand that I really can't comment...Just know I love you so much...You truly are my beautiful daughter.
    Love Tory Lin
  • Chained Fury
    May 17, 2005
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    As I have said last night...Really sorry for what happened but there's nothing I could have done about it. Would if I could. Things just work out that way, and society is one corrupted being. Sadly its just going to continue to happen, such crime will be endless for humanity. Glad you took the time to express your emotions on this piece, take care.

    -Chained Fury

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 17, 2005
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    Oh...well, it's quite stupid really and it usually wouldn't bother me, so nevermind. I love you, lovely. ♥
  • Silhouetted Angel
    May 17, 2005
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    ???

    Yeah... but where is this going cause I've been up since 5 and my brain isn't functioning...

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 17, 2005
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    Omg, I miss talking to you SO much...And I'll tell you what happened...This will be a stupid question now, but I'm in an emo mood...

    Am I special to you???
  • Silhouetted Angel
    May 17, 2005
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    Tell me what happened honey. Next time we are both online.. which will hopefully be today

    ♥

  • GauArrowny
    May 16, 2005
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    As do I... I wish I could be there to hold you at this moment, but I guess our little conversation ... and this comment will have to do. Wonderful, emotion/anger filled poem. Love.
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