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Its a cold, dark war

Its a cold, dark war
this I life I must live
I can't see the hand in front of my face
and I know that this is a slow pace

I can't see the stars that I know are there
I can't see the moon or clouds tonight
I can't feel anyone by my side
I can't feel the touch of another soul

I'm alone in the dark
I'm alone in this world
I'm a-lone-ly soul
I'm all alone in this dismal world

I've watched the birds in the tree
and I know that now I can't see
I've watch the people below
and my sy sorrow they'll never know

Its a cold, dark war
this I life I wish to leave
I can't feel a loving glance
and I know I'll never have that chance

I know that I'm forever alone
I know that you will never by mine
I know that they will scorn me forever
I know that I'm alone

I'm alone in the dark
In this cold, dismal war
This Life I wish to leave
and love I will never receive

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Written May 16th, 2005

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  • gothangel
    June 6, 2005
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    awesome job...good luck in my contest


  • antique
    May 16, 2005
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    wow this is great .. its powerful .. your words kinda make the reader feel rather isolated .. well it did to me .. thanks so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck in the contest .. keep the ink flowing hun

    ~Aimee