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Love Built On God's Foundation

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For Charles and Niki
(Onfire4Jesus and RebornJesusFreak)

My son Charles has some fantastic news
He has found someone to give his heart to
He met her on allpoetry a few months ago
Now his heart beats as if it were brand new

He told me his heart jumped out of his chest
Charles thinks only of her day and night
He was the most eligible bachelor around
All the girls gathered at his web site.

Wow, looks awesome in his navy uniform
Always so charming,sweet and debonair
Charles takes the time to always listen
When you need him he is always there.

Now he had a broken heart several times
but thinks this time it just might work out
So take your time son to do things right
learn what true love is really all about.

You must nurture love like a fragile rosebud
hold it gently for it is beautiful to behold
love will bloom with all of it's splendor
combine it with the greatest story ever told

For to truly love your hearts must always be
truly On fire for Jesus each and every day
And your desire to serve Him faithfully
Is what will keep all the wickedness away.

Son that is my advice take it or leave it
the choice has to be made only by you
I hope you and Niki find true love together
I'll always love and be here for you two.

Charles you could not ask for a sweeter girl
I can see how she cherishes and adores you
You both compliment each other so well
falling in love seems the right  thing to do.

I hope you two let me be a part of your life
for it would mean so very much to me
but only God knows what the future holds
only He knows the plans for you two and me.



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Charles, I love you my son. You know what you mean to me. I am so happy to see how happy Niki makes you. When you described to me how you felt last week I knew she made you happy. And after talking to her I know how much you mean to her. I am crying writing this. I hope you two find the happiness you both deserve. No one deserves it more then you and Niki. I will always be here for both of you. I love Niki too, she is so sweet and loving as a dear daughter on AP and now for real. For when you gave her your heart she got mine too. There is no greater joy in the world then to see your children  happy. You put so much joy in my heart. Words can no longer express the deepness of my love for you Charles. And Niki I love you as a daughter and I know one day my love for you will be as deep as the love I have for Charles. May God Bless you always. I love you both so much. Always Mom
Written May 16th, 2005

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  • shubs
    August 23, 2005
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    So Motherly

    Beautiful poem only a mom can feel so..and does so with elan .
    Reading this is like reading a Psalm...and this speaks volumes of what you have written,what you have felt,what you cherish,what you nurture..and believe me..God will act upon your wish list...God Bless Ye All..I came late over here..but better late than never at all--Shubs


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 21, 2005
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    Wow my son. This is a sweet poem you wrote to Niki in my comment. It was beautiful. I am so happy you liked the poem I wrote for you two.. It is reassurring to know you still have room for me in your life now too. I hope you will always feel that way because I do want to hold you children and love them as I do you son. God Bless you and Niki . Follow His guidance son and your life will be happy and fulfilled. I love you with all my motherly heart and will always be here for you. Forever Mom
    Edited on May 21, 8:20 because ''.


  • Onfire4Jesus
    May 20, 2005
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    You know mom, forever I will be
    happily in love with this girl
    In my heart, she will one day see
    that she is the one that rocks my world

    I love her with all of my heart
    and one day together we will be
    I just pray that we will never break apart
    because she makes me so very happy

    She may not realize it just now
    what she truly means to me
    But she'll find out one day, somehow
    that together and forever we will be

    So as I start my morning out each day
    with a call to the one I love
    I hope she is the one for me, this I pray
    because she is all I ever dream of

    So baby, baby, hold on tight
    for we are in this together
    I will love you with all my might
    as we are bounded in unity forever

    I love you now and forevermore
    and I just want you to know
    That I can't wait to see what's in store
    as my love for you continues to grow

    So know that it is you I need
    it is you that I dream about
    It is y our heart that I will always plead
    because it's you I cannot live without


    Sandy, I loved this and it spoke of such great and powerful and wonderful truth. I know that I have been so happy since I have met her and I very grateful and very thankful for her. She is such a wonderful and an amazing blessing to me in my life!! I just pray that God will continue to strengthen our hearts together as we Worship the Lord together in unity!! You will forever and always be a part of our lives Sandy!! You are our mom and we will forever love you with all that we can love you with!! You will be at our wedding, you will get to hold your grandkids when we have them, and you will even get to change their smelly diapers for us!! Now I know you'll love that one. But I thank you for being such a great role model, for being such a beautiful and wonderful mother, and for always being there for us!! I thank you for all your prayers and advice that you always give to us!! I will always love you!! Take care my dear sweet mother!! And always remember that you will be a part of our family!! Niki, I love you with all my heart!! God Bless You all!!!


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 18, 2005
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    Thank you for the wonderful comment My dear friend. I wish Charles so much happiness. God Bless you Liz. Take care, Sandy


  • Forms of Me
    May 17, 2005
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    Aww..Sandy..this is such a beautiful poem. You are so loving with everyone you hold dear to your heart. I pray the two of them are blessed and God's love flourishes between them. It is remarkable how God works in all of our lives.

    LIZ


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 17, 2005
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    Ah, thank you Shannon for the sweet comment on your AP brother and sister"s poem. I love all you guys, I am blessed with the best Ap kids on here. You all make me so happy.God Bless you and take care sweet daughter. Love, Mom


  • beautifulbrat
    May 17, 2005
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    aww Sandy this is so sweet! And they make such a cute couple!! I about cried reading this it was so sweet!! Keep up the good work Mommy! I love you! God Bless You


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 17, 2005
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    Ah thank you so much for the wonderful comment Annie. It is always such a pleasure to come on in the morning and start my day off by hearing from you. I hope all is well with you and your family. God Bless you all Take care, Sandy


  • May 16, 2005
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    Sandy, this is written with so much love, when I clicked on the page I went ohhhhhhh with a big smile... what a wonderful AP MOM you are! The bestest my dear sweet friend... Sandy, this is so beautiful to see so much love on this page, I wish them both the best and many many blessings from our dear Lord... Bless you my friend, and much love, Annie


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 16, 2005
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    Ah, Niki, you make me feel so special. You said so many wonderful things to me. I am tearing up again. I just got done crying from writing the poem and author's comment. I am so happy for you two. I know that God did bring us all together for a greater purpose. Only He know what. It has been an emotional roller coaster for me since this young man came into my life and into my heart before I knew what happened. I suppect he has done the same to you but in a different way. I love him as a mom and I know unlike being his real mom, he can leave my life at anytime because I am not his real mom. So I worry about that. But if that is what God has in store I will deal with it somehow. In the mean time I will enjoy being apart of your happiness. It fills my heart with joy. Just make each other happy and don't hurt each other. You two were made for each other. Get to know each other then you will know what makes each other happy. And thank God everyday for bringing you together, for it was in His plan. I love you both and am so happy for you. God Bless you. Love, Mom.


  • OnlyOneLifeToLive
    May 16, 2005
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    Mom! This is so completely and utterly wonderful! I'm not sure what to say other than I love you! You are an awesome mother. I know that from what I've heard from Charles and you and by what I see. I am so happy with him. I love him with all that I am and he knows it. I'm so happy to be able to call you Mom. You've shown me more care and love than my own mother has recently! It would be so awesome to be able to live with you! I wish in my mind that I had grown up with you as a mother. But now I do have you as a second mother, and you mean lots to me! God works in wonderful ways! He certainly did with bringing the three of us together! Someday, hopefully soon, I can come up there and Charles and I can come visit you for a little while. That would be so awesome! This poem was so wonderful and almost made me tear up! You are an awesome Mom and I know we will get closer as time goes on! God Bless You! I love you always Mom!!
    ~Niki

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