Screaming through the halls
Bashing out the walls
This creature is trying to take over
Depression like a knife
Kills me and what little life
I struggle to take cover
I don't wanna be bitter and broken
This can't be my only token
To show what i have done
I want to finally see
All the good in humanity
Instead of being hurt on the run
Don't kick me while I'm down
I'm not your psycho clown
Presenting to you insanity
There is still magic in these fingers
If only i could find what still lingers
in the background of the morgue waiting patiently
For something to die
I need a reason why
Why can't I feel your touch
Maybe I'm too lost
I didn't foresee the cost
And this burden is way to much
So if you're really there
Please show me that you care
And free me from this self made cell
Because lately I've been afraid
You're a fantasy that i made
TO make life seem better then hell
And i don't want to live if life's a dream
There must be more then it seems
I don't' want to be lost in a see of faces
I want to know I'm OK
I wanna hear you say
That i am better then all these disgraces
The red hashes on my arm
Only bring me much more harm
And i need to find a place of rest
So please show me a glimpse
of something better than this
I need something better than second best...
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Written May 15th, 2005
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thanks
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ur words always lift my spirits, thanks :-) ur like....an auntie to me :-) Love you, amerz
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excellent
this is just wow...it's truely amazing...it's so obvious that you have TONS of talent...this is just an awesome poem....ur a wonderful poet! i don't kno any other words 2 express how much i love this poem...its just...wow...
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Once again my sweet one you have poured your heart on this page, and very touching I might add, could feel the pain, the anxiousness... remember you are number one, always... hold you head high, your beauty shines in you and your talent
Very well done, Love you, Annie 
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aw thanks, it's cool to know that people really do care, even if it is only a select few :-)
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hehe cool, i'm glad you enjoyed it :-)
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aw thanks :-)
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This was powerful and deserves a lot of praise for the pain and tears within. Hey many online friends would always be there for you of this I’m sure and many would always open their arms and hearts to you. Always remember there is a brighter future ahead and an end to all pain and happiness hiding in wait for you, in all things.
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I love it. It's dark, intense...I love it!
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I like this!!! It was pretty dark, and really intense and powerful. I like your rhyme scheme here too. Great job!!
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