Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

My Treasure Box

And I will think of you during my days
since the bright ones
until the most tempestuous ones too
And I will keep your name
in my memory
and my dreams
in a little treasure box
which I will give to a angel to protect it.

Author notes


Written May 15th, 2005

A contest entry

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • RitaMaria
    May 20, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Thanks, Vaseline. And I have liked to participate of your contest No, the beginning is not missing.My intention when I have written this poem was exactly this.It is a short poem that is part of a (no written) longer poem.
    Rita.


  • vaseline
    May 20, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    im glad that you put this back in, i really liked it, and it was short but still kept me wanting to read moer, the only i may say i didnt like about this was that it seemed like the beginning was missing lol, is it just me?