Screaming tears,
Hurting Inside;
Shouting anger,
Dead on the outside;
Give me wings
And let me fly away,
Somewhere far from here,
Just let my soul free;
Smiles fade,
Tears last;
Laughs turn to cries,
Emotionless;
Faded scars,
Scars reopened;
On my sheets stains blood,
Just once, I wish I cut deep enough;
To end these emotionless feelings inside.
Author notes
This poem is to be different, I don't know it was just differen't I was bored when I wrote it...and i guess it doesn't make much sense to others on account people are saying "make it flow" ?? w/e yeah...just wanted to do something different
Written May 15th, 2005
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i like it, different aint always a bad thing..
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It is a bit different..but..I like it...as usual.
I hope you are well...I have missed talking.
Take care..
LIZ -
:) great
aww this is awesome!! keep up the good work
I look forward to reading more
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this was really good. i can feel the emotions in it and i like that but i am very sorry that you are hurting
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great job! I like the feeling you put into it and your word choice, but like CaTeYeZ said make sure it flows.
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good
This is good, but make sure it flows, that everything goes to gether. but other than that you did a excellent job
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Emotional (haha I had to)
Nice..
it could use more structure..Its good though...
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