You sit under the lotus
With a lucent moon hanging over your blood stained eyes
You jab yourself over and over again with the needle
With Lucifer by your side you have nothing to fear
You smile as you watch your crimson river flow out of your veins
And feel the drugs crawling under your skin
You fall backwards and lay in the tainted grass
Soaking in all that had happened
You open your eyes to find Lucifer staring down at you
With a wicked smile dancing on his lips
He thrusts the needle into your heart with a laugh
Now you are truly lost
Now you are eternally his
Author notes
I guess you would have had to be there and see what was going on to really understand this poem but I hope that you enjoy it any ways 
Written May 14th, 2005
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I had a great image in my head throughout this poem. I like it, raw emotions I could definitely feel, making it powerful in it's own way.. Well done
Take care
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Thanks again ... yeah I don't think I would ever think about doing that .... don't beat you stereo too hard it might like it. Loves ya
~Rachel~ -
Thanks for the comment and hopefully I will be writting more ... I think I'm over my writer's block but we'll have to see. Well love ya
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no i think im ok lol that good ur not shooting durgs up ur arms that bad bad muhahahahahahahahahahahaahha lol well anyways great pome again..... now i have to beat up my stereo bc it wont play any good songs muhahahahahahahaha love ya
hillary* -
Rachel this is a great write kind of confusing at first but i caught on well keep up the great write love you like a sista :-) byebyes
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Awe thanks ... and don't worry I'm fine ... and you seemed kinda confused at first ... no I'm not shooting drugs in my arms but is there anything else that I might make clear for you ?
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Thanks and yeah I think your probably the only one on this site that really understands whats going on in this poem. Love ya
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thanks for the comment and I'm glad that you think it very out there
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well..... hummmmmmm..... i liked a lot but.......i dont know lol its a great poem yea u put another one up!! i always love reading ur poems there awsome...... i here if u need to talk.... love ya
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wow, yea great one... i definatley got it... take care... love ya ~later
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Great poem. I loved it, it's very...out there.
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thanks for the comment and I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem
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thanks ... I'm glad that you liked it
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ty ... I'm gald you liked it
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very dramatic. i really like this
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Good.
I like the role drugs play in this poem. Very thought-provoking. -
i enjoyed your poem its good.
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