If i love you
why do i cry
If i love you
why do u sigh
I love you, i love you not
is the game that you play
While u stare deep in my heart
and follow whatever i say
At the time my heart was black
listening to the songs
The words
sang back to back
If i love you
why do i cry
If i love you
why do you sigh
And the words repeated
like a dog
like an animal
Is this they way i should be treated
I gave it my all
to try to stop your mistakes
But the words flowed out
this is what i saw
If i love you
why do i cry
If i love you
why do you sigh
Author notes
Um....... i love this poem soooo much!!!! It's kinda corny but i love it!!!!
Written May 14th, 2005
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i loveit too. i mean it sounds like a song and that makes it even better. well this is amazing
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No, i wouldn't call it corny, and even if it was everyone needs to read a corny poem once in a while!!lol. Great job!It could be a song....with the whole chorus and all!lol
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when i read this it kinda sounded like a song lol. its good though... another one about gabriel hmm hmmm? jk lol good poem though
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