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Looking

Watching fallen stars
Wondering why we fall too
But they never get up

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Written May 14th, 2005

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  • brokenangel12
    May 16, 2005
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    this is beautiful great jobg andrw u should join my contest

  • poetryfix
    May 14, 2005
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    cute

    This is a short and sweet cute poem. Stars are the most amazing things in this universe, and a metaphore for many struggles and triumphs in life, and the potential of being a star that shines so brightly. Keep writing