A carpet of tears, the starry sky
The silver moon gently floats by
Glimmering, glowing through the night
The clouds fly swiftly out of sight
But despite the beauty all around
The sparkling dew upon the ground
The sheet of mist that's always here
The eerie absence of your fear
Reflections in the midnight pool
A mirror for the frightened fool
A bit of wind, a touch of cold
Other feelings I will never hold
Though piece by piece, it passes by
When time has stopped to take a sigh
And in that moment, the shadow grew
I whip around, and I see you
I ask: "Who are you, why are you here?"
Intensly staring back, deepening my fear
You bare your teeth, your look seeming vile
Then your lips upturn, resembling a smile
You slowly approach, sit by my side
Gently hold my hand in yours, feeling tongue-tied
Whispering in my ear, sweet nothings of new
Words soft as petals in the morning dew
His face got closer, and closer still
Cold breath on my neck, waiting for the kill
His arms surround me like a soft embrace
He then brings his head back, and looks me in the face
His demeanor was allluring, secretive and true
Like soft light shining, the essence of hue
All in this moment, it feels like forever
Diminishing thoughts of him, I think never
Author notes
Written October 20th, 2008 This is told from the view point of Bella and the guy is Edward, I saw the movie and I got inspired.
A contest entry
- Does Twilight Dazzle You? by TwilightDazzles.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful... - what else can be said...
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I love the flow and rhyme you've got here. Sweet writting, good inspiration
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This is wonderfully written. You should definitely read the books if you liked the movie Seriously, you'll be blown away. I really like this! Thanks for entering and best wishes
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Ok, I'll read the books! lol thank you for the wonderful comment!
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My God...
That was awesome. I got hooked. And, you alone saw the movie?! Aw man, if you read the books, this poem would give me a heart attack. Awesome write. Edward should act like. Bella's emotions were there too. I love it. Awesome job. -
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Thank you so much for your comment! It really means a lot
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This is basically AMAZING. I love it.
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I like it!
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wow
impressive. nice vocabulary use
wow that was geeky. but true
great write
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I really, really liked this. The flow starts out nice in the beginning then the rhythm starts to go off beat alittle. It's still an awesome write though.
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Very cool!
I like this a lot...beautiful wording. I stink at rhyming, but you don't! Really nice!
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wow..... I really loved this poem very nicely written
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This was very beautifully written
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Very Beautiful
I liked the beginning. You really wrote beautifully to describe the elegent moon. Very good.
Feel free to check out my poems. Thanks for sharing your talent. Please continue to share your beautiful words with us.
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This is Astaraelneth's BEST friend : I just loved this poem-very good,BRAVO!!!!!!! <(^.^<) p.s. sorry i snuck on and wrote this hehe not! jk love ya
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