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the me i despise

so this is me
who I've become and i will be
this man i despise
can i change will i ?
i hurt those i love most
i hate the me I've become
i tried so hard to be the good one
one of the few that are kind and understanding
i failed hopelessly with no one to blame but me


this goes out to the love of my life that i have treated so wrong
the beautiful woman that once loved me
the one that don't call anymore
the one that don't come see me anymore
I'm sorry
so sorry
but this is me and no matter how hard i try
no matter how bad i want to
i cant change
this is me.......
selfish
this is me
needy
this is me saying I'm sorry pleading for forgiveness that i don't deserve
this is me ........love me ...please

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Written May 14th, 2005

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  • lilShorty22
    June 8, 2005
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    wow.. this is reall deep.. but i know where your coming from (even though im not a guy).. not from your perspective,.. but i got you... goodwrite!--Shorty
    Edited on Jun 08, 8:53 p.m. because ''.