Come closer,
succumb to the dark embrace of the night
gaze at infinity
Illuminated soul
flawless beauty
cold perfection
Whisper softly,
listen to the lament
An aching sadness
loneliness
sacrificed for knowledge,
power
for the dark holds many gifts
to one willing to study its promises
Come closer,
let joy course through you as the light cradles your pain
gaze at infinity
Illuminated soul
purpose
eternal beauty
life
Sing to your heart's delight
dance to the rivers flow
One in everything
warmth
for the light holds much purpose,
to one willing to be humble
DARK/LIGHT
Balance
Rise to the heavens
Spread your wings
no shadow can touch you
no ray burn you
pure one
you know truth
Each has its path
it alone chooses its fate
choose wisely
for you have eternity to die
and but moments to live
Author notes
very weird, just random thoughts
Written May 14th, 2005
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this was a good poem. left speechless. all i have to say is keep on writting..
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amazing
great job. dont knwo what to say. lol amazing poem.
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wow, omg this is amazing, so pretty and meaningful. im sorry i would write loadsa clever stuff to match your poem but my brain is currently dead so... yeh. i love it, great job, well done -x-x-x-
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Great poem. Sorry, that's all I can think of to say! Well done
C-hippy x
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And I tip my hat to you! Great job!
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This is amazing! it gives me a warm happy feeling inside. Its a great write, i love it lots
Blessed Be -
thankyou
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wow. You showed very clearly the effects of balance. I loved this. You have a wonderful style of poetry unlike any I have seen before (apart from in your other poems
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Well done.
Keep up the good work.
XxX
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