Freewill, born inside each one.
Enchanting the waking moment of each graced day.
Simple words with so much more.
Freewill- giving a reason to love.
Whispering a thousand lifetimes,
None so beautiful as the one you live now.
Look up! See the world, as it was meant to be!
No more dark clouds overhead. Be who you want to be!
Freewill, coursing through the world.
Do as you please,
Let no one or nothing hold you back.
Take back the day! It is yours!
Freewill…
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Written May 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- Freewill by Feline2001.
300 points, ended May 19, 2005, 1 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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amazing!
Yay for free will,what a great poem Johnni!we truly have free will and we get to choose what we do with it!I love that rhyme:"Look up see the world as its meant to be ,no more dark clouds overhead,be who you want to be!Thats a great combo,rhyme,imagery,rhyme,great talent!Lovely job Johnni,i adore this poem,never stop writing the classics
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Melissa j. -
wow this is great. i love the word "freewill" so much and you really captured what it is all about. well done
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This is so beautiful and so true. The first line speaks so well to humaity. If we could all just understand who we are and the gracious gift we could be to one another, what a splendid world this would become. This is tiouching and gracious. SPLENDIDLY WRITTEN AND ELOQUENT!
Renee ♥
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aww this is beautiful! Thank you for writing such an amazing poem for such an amazing person!
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