When you lay your head down
i hope you haunted by your dreams
And the days you smiled i frowned
wondering what this means to me
All the years you weren't here
brings pain to my heart
Knowing you weren't near
cause you were blinded from the start
Dad i miss you
i hope you know
That when you think of me also
it seems as far as a note
You beat with whips
you broke many hearts
My mom is better now
then she was from the start
The second time i think of you
i wish you burned in hell
Cause all the pain you put us through
it's calm without your yells
Now i see
i don't need you back
Don't beg nor plea
your heart will be forever black
Author notes
This poem is about my dad... DUH. I kinda dislike him ALOT!!! Then again he's my dad so i love him at the same time. So...... I hate this poem!!!!
Written May 13th, 2005
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i love all your poetry
Kiara- I hope you spelled it right wow yes i agree we have alot of things in common and i really like it. It nice to find someone to relate to. The guy kept begging me to walk to meet him last night but I live in grant and he lives in downtown newagyo wich is about 15 miles from one another so that just totally wouldnt happen lol. -
tihsi s a reat poem i know what you mean by how you HATE your father but hes you father so yu got to love him, yea that sucx. great poem and i thik e reltionship between you guys myte get better on day
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kiara just to let you know i think you mean be instead of me in hte last line lol. but other than that it was awesome i know how you feel even though i live with my dad.
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i've had the same experiences.
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