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Under the Vault of the Heavens We Walk

 






Under the vault of the heavens we walk
as our love in the fifth house aligns
and the tint on window of the glass to our souls
reflects the radiance of a love inclined.

 

Imaginative, your sun sign says you are,
sensitive, compassionate, and all too kind,
selfless and sympathetic, too,
as the Celestial Sphere says you were meant to be mine!

 


 

Rest not until you satisfy your desires
in the seventh house of our mingled fates
and in your fertile world of dreams
we’ll travel to a remote, exotic place...

 

Your astrological sun sign, my dear,
is the sun sign Pisces of the Zodiac.
it might be meaningless to you,
but for me it frames you in ivory black...


 

We’ll find out your sexuality through your Vesta sign,
your combativeness through your Pallas sign,
your soulmate through your Juno sign,
(and I believe that will be me in time...)

 

What kind of mother you’ll be is in your Ceres sign,
your generation's character in your Power sign,
your spirituality in your Neptune sign
and other magical mysteries.

 


 

Your worldly presence is in your rising sign,
your emotional outlook in your lunar sign,
we'll find where Mercury is in your communication sign,
and where Venus has placed your romantic sign.

 

Mars will tell you your passion sign,
Jupiter determine your lucky sign,
the lessons you learn in your Karma sign
will help the healing powers you find in Chiron’s sign.

 


 

If that’s not enough, there are all the houses
and the planet’s positions when you were born,
all this tells me who you are,
and if it is you I should love, or you I should scorn...

 


You thought astrology was simple, think again,
and be mindful of your planet's geometries, my friend!

 

 

 

 

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Written May 13th, 2005

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  • still.she.waits
    August 16

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    and you think astrology is crap.....[okay, semi-crap]
    *raises eyebrows*
    uh-huh.


    • wbiro gold member
      August 16
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      (and I just fixed the pics, I need to go through ALL my poems and fix the pics... ech... the link locations changed on me...)


    • wbiro gold member
      August 16
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      yes, other than describing me and my relationships to a tee, yes...!

      • still.she.waits
        August 16
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        niiice. like I said, the moon and the stars know when my mania is coming. [no sarcasm here on that]. relationships... eh, not so much.

        • wbiro gold member
          August 16
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          mania... I think it's a mood thing, a chemical thing, because it is completely irrational... but no, wait! It is a self-sufficiency thing... if one becomes self-sufficient, and has a good measure of security... then no mania...


          • still.she.waits
            August 16
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            heh. security..... haha. yeah.

            • wbiro gold member
              August 16

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              yeah... AND if you can provide security for others, then you're way ahead of that game... but then you take on worldly problems, and become manic and paranoid about those issues (just look at the global warming hysteria)... so maybe one can't win if one has a tendency toward it...

              • still.she.waits
                August 16
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                providing security for others is what I do best. providing security for myself, on the other hand is a completely different story. but alas, I don't have time to take on the world.
                and darlin', I never win.

                • wbiro gold member
                  August 16
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                  hmmm... I'm picturing 'providing security' for yourself as 'grabbing what you need' instead... and some of us do not do enough of that...!

  • Bob Fox
    August 11, 2007

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    The Geometrics

    3/25 here. Some sign. But As a new age reader I believe the signs signify changes in our solar system As well as movement thru the ages. But only the Anunnaki really know. But I must say a very thought out brilliant write

    • wbiro gold member
      August 11, 2007
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      thanks for the comment- I don't know about you, but comments (even silent views!) spur me to go back over a piece, no matter how old, and this one still isn't quite 'good enough' yet, something missing...

  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    May 13, 2005
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    Dearest, this is amazing. I am just wowed at your fluency and word choice. It really made me take a step back and think about what was behind this, rather than just reading it. It's easy to read poetry, but a real poem makes you think about all that you read. And this is definitely a real poem! Great job! I loved it!

    Much love
    Jess

  • Stand In Girl
    May 13, 2005
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    I love this poem, it's interesting and fun and amaazingly well written! I'm into astrology as well so I guess that might have something to do with it, but very nice, it's very beautiful.


  • Imokon
    May 13, 2005
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    Too bad I'm the Pisces..
    I've heard that male Pisceans are cheaters.
    What goes with a female pisces anyway?
    Besides scorpio and cancer that is..

  • LonelyLover01
    May 13, 2005
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    this is interesting...I have never been a huge fan of astrology but it was a interesting read none the less, keep up the good work. Have fun writing!!!


  • B2oH
    May 13, 2005
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    Okay.....so now we're into Astrology eh? Sigh....we should simply call you the Wandering Biro (Biro...isn't that a pen - how apt) and string a mandolin about your neck (some suggest tar and feathers as well).

    All I know is this stuff gets complicated quite quickly and makes my head spin...so then I see stars...which as it is, I suppose. Now if I only had a rocket ship...

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