There are things in life you want to do,
There are things in life you need to do,
Being with you is something I wanna and need to do!
There are things in life that make seance,
There are things in life that seem right,
Being with you is something I think would be so right!
There are things in life you may enjoy,
There are things in life you may crave,
Being with you is something I would so love to do!
There is someone I love who is you,
There is someone I love what do I do?
Being with you is something I know want come true!
There is somethink I need to ask you,
There is somethink I need to know colin will you love me and never let me go?
Author notes
I really like this boy Colin
Written May 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- Hope in a bucket by Glyph Sculptor.
300 points, ended July 5, 2005, 15 entries
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this is really gd how many more ave i got 2 go
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nice sentiments expressed here and the roses remind me of a fancy decorated cake. had one question though... did you mean 'seance' to be 'sense'?
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Lol thanks,
All my best!
God Bless You And May He Stand By You When You Need Him most!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxAlex LoverxX -
positive effort, nice color scheme for the visual
i do sense the hope
um, and good luck with Alex -
Hiya Sammy,
No that isnt Alex, Alexc isit on here I dunno what that comment was about I am a bit scared though lol
All my love!
God Bless You And May He Stand By You When You Need Him Most!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxAlex LoverxX -
Hiya 'dajahsi'
Thanks for the comment!
Ermmmm my mate just read your comment also and he said it sounds like you are in love with me!!
Is this true?
All my best!
God Bless You And May He Stand By You When You Need Him Most!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxAlex LoverxX -
Hiya Sophie,
Thanxz for the comment babe girl!
Ya school is good thanks this is my last full week at school I leave school on Wednesday next week
Yes I am still friends with Zak
O btw Garys baby is ok!!
Thanxks once again
All my best,
God Bless You And May He Stand By You When You Need Him Most!
Thanks for looking after me on Sunday!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxAlex LoverxX -
I am seeing something here!!! Is dajahsi Alex?
Sarah you keeping secrets from me girlie?
By the way you got a few spelling mistakes
Luv ya! Nice write!
Samantha xxx -
jelly you know i love you too.
but really this is a nice poem..
and in return..
There is nothing better then your touch
Nothing more special then the way you scream when we make love
Being with you makes me feel alive
Being without you,
Makes me think suicide is a greater feat
Being with you is all I know
because from the first day you touched me through this screen
I have never been the same
and love the smile you put on my face
Being with you I am safe
and know tomorrow is a better day...
HOLLA AT ME JELLY -
hey babe
aw dat is so cute
i think u and alex well suit and i hope u 2 get 2gether babe
r u still mates wid zak?
hows skool 2day?
keep up the fab poetry
God bless
all my love
XxsophiexX aka Xxsingle girlxX
SafeCuzSupaManBogeyManJakieBuffSophieHugTWEEEED
ET=HATER= SINGLE
LUVIN TOBY 4EV@
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Aww this sis so tormantic
Keep writing, this was beautiful
Thanks for your comment
All the best,
Pozo
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Lol 1: Thanxz for being the 1st to comment babe grl!
2: Yes you do know who and what it is about becaause it is about Alex!
3: Love you
All my best!
God Bless You And May He Stand By You When You Need Him Most!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxAlex LoverxX
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aww bless baby this poem is soo lovely and i think i know what and who is this about and i hope it all works ut for you babe
Keep up the great poetry
Love Kerrie xXx
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