there's something in the way you move by Sharon Corr at All poetry

there's something in the way you move
Love me baby as you do
Us as we, can't stop loving true
This kiss I wish of two shines through

Hold me dear in your loving thoughts
As I love you, as you do me
With all the memories, and forget me not's
I'll be your loving, ocean sea

Thanks for sharing your love story
I love you like no other
Something in the way you move me
As we seem to love undercover

I want you baby, I need you too
As you dream of me, I feel you naturally
Us as we, entwined as one, loving true
Set me free within our souls of destiny

Forever here, there, and everywhere
I shall love you underneath bright suns
And my love so true is eternally sincere
Love me baby, for my heart is faithful fun

Love me, love me do
there's something in the way you move
Love me baby as you do
Us as we, can't stop loving true
This kiss I wAs I seal hearts with a kiss

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Courtly love we do it in the road
While our hearts and love booms ensoul
Why don't we do it on the road of Chicago
You can dance your loving tango
I can wrap my arms around you in one Spanish mambo
Let do it in the road baby as you dance with me ensoul

Baby blue I open up my eyes
I touch the love in your sunny skies
I want to sing dance and play your way
Dear baby blue won't you come out to play
I've gone round and round on your merry go round
And I'm lost in your love even when I'm found

Baby blue I long to see your smile
In your eyes that beguile me tenderly
Dear baby blue play with me in the summer rains
Won't you let me in from the cold winter winds
So we can sing dance and play in love today
I long for you baby blue and I can't stop loving you
Won't you come out to play and wrap your loving arms my way today

I only long to play with you baby blue
Wrap my love all around you
Never leaving you alone kissing you until you sigh
You sing to the story in my eyes
You make me feel loved I'm blooming alive

I would love to love you in my own way as you come out to play
I would sing to you sweet baby blue see the sunny skies
Lets do it in the road no one will ever know
Its only me and you, round and round we go
Dance with me baby blue and come out to play
As we sing I can't stop loving you today.

I long to see your smile I long for your eyes that beguile
I long for you touch I long to be one as the power of the sun
Dear baby blue won't you come out to play
And let me wrap my loving arms around you today.
Dear baby blue come out to play as I sing and dance your way
The sunshine is shinning on us and our songs of love are alive and true
Sung to the sweet tunes of I can't stop loving you baby blue
Dear sweet lover man hold my heart eternally in your hand of rose today
As I come out to play and sing I love you today my sweet rose of yesterday.

I search no more on our long and winding road
I sing I love you ensoul to all the beauty we know
Something in your smile shows me
You and I are meant to be

I know our love blooms and grows
As the red blooming rose on my author's page
I know I know the road of my soul baby
I know I love you as you love me I need you tenderly
I need you all the time forever you've been a true love of mine

I just know what you need to remain on the shores of being ensoul
I just know that I can't leave you baby and I can't stop loving you
I never knew who is who that is the magic to our loving touch and us baby
I love you sincerely I love you dearly I love you undercover I have no other lover
I could not love another man they way I love you my loving angel of a man
Who only asks to share my heart my dreams my hand

Cherishing our courtly romance this is a love that poets dreams of
This is the meaning of life beyond a doubt by loving you in the road ensoul
You're all the truth I shall ever know
I would do it with you under the sea
I would do it in the yellow submarine

As long as you we're there with me to hold us tenderly
Something in the dreams you share with me in peace
Something in our love we share tenderly in sweet beauty
I believe in you and our dream will come true

I have never felt a love this rich and deep
You're the one I love and your heart I doth seek
If it takes until the end of time baby your mine
I love you more than the moon the sun the stars in the sky
You're my very breathe of my life I need you by my side
I need you to hold us each and every night in magic loving so tight
I would never leave you my beloved your so much fun
The sun shines in your tender love and heart with the band on the run.

I never had a clue who is who
All I shall ever know baby
Is I can't stop loving you
Something in the way you move me
Something in the way your dreams reach me tenderly
Something in the way you touch my heart and I feel we've never been apart
I've love you baby from the very start you know my soul you know my heart

My love has grown and I just want to show you that I need you and love you so
A woman needs a man could I be the one to still hold your hand tenderly
Sweet baby blue lets do it in the road and don't say maybe
No one will be watching us over the satellite feed only seven billion people
Will be watching on broadcast feed, as I love you in beauty tenderly
Who care at this point in time they can watch us from below and above
We're in love sweet sweet love here now on terras shores and from heavenly love

I would not care where we are as long as I am in your arms you holding me tight
Loving US all night impassioned as only we can do, in the sweet heartbeat of you
You ask me is there a place for me and you
Along your long and winding roads is all the truth you shall ever know
You know I have an open heart baby, I love you with all my heart ensoul
You know that I've searched forever to find you baby and came up with zero

I had the feeling that the man known to me as loving grace
Must be from outer space because nobody can find him in the human race
Its so darn humorous why is the one we love always the last on the list
Something in the way you move me will keep our love wild and free eternally

I shall love you forevermore
Everything I do is because I love you
I can't stop loving you
You look into my heart
We sing in unison true love never parts
There is nothing I want more than to love you
And you know my heart is true
There is no one like you baby blue
There is not another lover who lights my fires of desire
Who takes me higher and higher in true loves fever fires
I feel like such a heartbreaker baby
Listen please to my heartbeat singing to you
I can't stop loving you
I loved you and never touched you
But I would travel any road if you asked me too
There is nothing I would not do for you
I can't stop loving you baby blue.
It's true we loved each other for a long time
It's been a long and winding road back to your mine
But I've never stopped loving you

If you need a friend you can depend you can call on me
Cause baby blue I will love you and love you tenderly
I need a man who needs me to need him all the way
Until we are one heartbeat dancing free in love today
Darling believe in all our dreams I would never lead you astray
You attract me naturally something in the way your heart sing to me
Something in the way you can reach me beyond the shores of time
Something in your style something in your charming smile
I don't know if I can remain alone without you by my side
You're all the sweet love I've ever known in my heart and soul

I need you as you need me softly tenderly to be one
In love as the power of the sun
There is one thing I know I can do do for you my sweet baby blue
I know I can love you impassioned that will send us to the skies above
As we're wrapped as one in our love and dance the night in sweet romance
Impassioned lovers are us, I seek only your hand and you play on with the band.
Something are just meant to be and I can't stop loving you
You bring me love and happiness I trust you loving touch
I need you very much my heavenly dove

I'm underneath the sea calling to you my sweet baby
Why don't we do it in the road spring summer or fall I love you all in all
Why don't we do it in the road being ensoul as you dance the tango
Maybe if you dance the mambo we can do it in the road ensoul baby
Maybe if you dance with me we can do it in the road in fever fires
As the world is watching us go higher and higher on starlight wings
I don't care as long as you have your loving arms all around me naturally
We can do it in the road we can do it anywhere we can do it in the tub
As I sing rub a dub dub, we can do it anywhere baby now, don't say maybe
No one will be watching us except seven billions eyes will be upon US.
Why don't we just do it in on the yellow brick road of my sweet home Chicago
Who cares they can even film us in the air here there and everywhere
We don't care as long as were one shinning as the sun
And we do know how to have fun fun fun, with the band on the run
No one will be watching us as we sing in fever fires ensoul
Lets do it in the road baby as we dance one forever tango
To the sweet tune of I can't stop loving you.
Why should your remain blue when I sing I love you.
Make our dreams come true I long for you baby blue; you're the apple of my eye
I want you to feel awake alive, dearly loved inside
You're a beautiful loving man in musical reprise
Je'tadore to your tender loving and compassionate eyes,
I am in love with your magic touch and whisper I need your love to fill me up,
I would love to be a captive bird nesting in your tender heart and never part,
You must have come from some far off star
My beloved baby blue no one does love the way you do,
Tender sweet romance impassioned from the golden shores of courtly romance,
I can't stop loving you my sweet baby blue,
Come out to play, let us sing another tune.
My sweet lover I can't stop loving you
Hold US until all our dreams come true in beauty.

2:07 AM
Written May 13th, 2005

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Sharon Corr
May 20, 2005
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I deeply love Poeticweaver, and cherish him t
~My Cherished Beloved Friend Timothy The Poetic Weaver~

Darling “Nobody Famous” carry me back to the heart of thee
My desire is never to leave our warm love and our destiny
Lovely is your love and lovely is your cerise beauty
We both breathe each other as a first-born flower to spring

Far have we both traveled and the light is all we have seen
In the starry midnight skies and the truth of our love we both realize
My desire is too hold you close to my heartbeat tenderly
The window of my soul is open wide seems you sweep me off my feet

I never know where I am at when I am in your arms
But I know your heartstrings strum my love as an angelic harp
We may remain oceans apart yet you have never left my loving heart
Smile and let your love shine no more tears about your memories
As we both let our love bloom higher and higher in loves desire

Let the warm rains surround our soul once again
As a warm blue mist from the seven seas eternally
You touch my heart and the magic of your love sticks
You have the touch of the heavens within your heart and hands

Darling I shall love you eternally beyond this life of plenty
We both have been painted in valleys of green in our blue seas
We have a love that is heaven sent as your presence is within
The heavenly tunes we both weave in our soul naturally

I shall love you tender, and love you true,
Darling I’ll never stop loving you
If you should find that I am here within your mind
Then maybe one day you will see
Its love I send from you to me.

Smile in the sunshine we have lived the passion and still there is US
We both have US and our rare and sacred trust
Nobody can ever take this from our hearts that seek unity
We can come together as the best of friends upon a journey that will never end

True love can never depart from our whole hearts
There is our time then there is the Lord’s time
As he seeks to join our minds in valleys of green
You know the road of both our heart being ensoul

Your heavenly blue mists roll into my heart naturally
Darling if you stood before me I would sing sing sing
As your love sweeps me off my feet carrying me in our lovers destiny
Our desires have been natural and we are one in the Lords loving sun

I wrap you in my wings, warmly, naturally
I give you all my Love and Loving
Within a blue ocean we sing
Our desires remain one in US

Deep within our valleys of green our sacred trust
Darlings trust that I love you very much
In the lines of rock n roll is the truth that you’re my soul
I can’t stop loving you
Love me do, as I love you.

Darling one who loves me as the power of the sun
The mist of love is dancing around you and me eternally
Lovely is the sunset upon the loch banks in the far west
Mist of time root us in as one ship upon the sea naturally

My desire is always to be here with you everywhere
We’ve travelled so far just to be where we are
Seems we both came from a far off star
Where our memories rain in the hills bays and the sea afar

In the Caledonian Isles we once sang and danced
It happened a long time ago and still we can’t let go
Oh something’s are way beyond me as we sing in heavenly chords

We both strum the heartstrings of the divine Lord
Your heart is not a mystery to US I trust you with all my heart
As your love grows higher and higher one thing I’ve learned
My beloved is true love never parts not from the centre of your heart

We sweep thru the narrow roads and our dwelling once again
We were once upon the coast of Ireland as we join our hands time and time again
We both sing I can’t stop loving you as the mist is rolling in from the sea
Seems you take me back to where my soul remains in our ferries and Islay we stay

Our desires are one and on fire our love is fascinating
Darling you’re a warm blue mist that rolls in all over me
I have travelled so far within your tender heart
And in the being that is you is only higher desire

I know you’re an angel of light and with me you feel so right
Some loves are forbidden taboo and out of sight
Our love just blooms naturally from the mists beyond the seven seas
Your songs are heaven sent one again as you sweep me in lavender once again

I smile at you and you smile at me seems love is as easy as 1 23
If this is how you desire your life to be, we see with eyes of the seven seas,
We sing our songs and give to all of humanity
As your blue mist roll in and surround me naturally

Going now beyond who is who standing one ensoul with you
Let me strum the heavenly chords of your angelic heart
Our desire is to be wrapped as one in cupids dart
We’re both travelled very far and the Lords love is on fire
Within you and me

I love you my darling but give this to the Lords Grace
I cannot chose whom you win or whom you lose
So we both sing our songs of love once again
And be one heavenly choir in our never ending desire

5/20/05 7:57:07 PM

~XXX Hugs, Love, Kisses, Eternal Peace, Namaste Blessed Be, Sharron~

~You shall always be in your heart tender lovely and most of all true to the love that is within you.
Truly my new old friend you’re in “The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen.”
If I could carry you on the wings of the night bird to our hearts once again,
I would do anything for you my beloved friend.
I can’t stop loving you, and my heartbeats just for you,
Your smile fills me thru even in the summer mists and rains
Why it’s our love that binds us in a higher love that is meant to be
My desire is to wrap you in my wings and be just one song
You my darling is where I belong, its not a mystery its where we belong

LOL, I must stop, as we remain on fire in our never-ending desire~
poeticweaver
May 20, 2005
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Lovely!
Lovely as the dolphins in the deep, blue sea
Lovely are all the beautiful songs you sing naturally
I inhale each word as if breath were sweet poetry
I love the art within your search for a lover's destiny

Sing your songs in tune under the blue moon of my heart
Let the windows to your soul see me as struming your angelic harp
Know I'm here, there, and everywhere in the sweet tune of love
I give you my words and my melodies from the songs so high above

Let it rain upon our smiling faces with love of the ocean seas
Let it pour forevermore I can't stop loving you eternally
Cuddle within word I weave in heaven's tune in the afternoon
Love me tender, love me true, I'll never stop dear loving you

Much love, Timothy The Poetic Weaver
Sharon Corr
May 19, 2005
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Wonderful Heartfelt Comment!

~Hello, Hello Hello, My New friend Amunet Wolfbane~ it will be my Birthday soon. I would like to know if I’m going to a party where i can sing and dance. Please take a chance you have been on the sight for a long long time. With ~7440 critiques~ what do you think. RAM is Paul this is for sure. Justin said over and over to me, he is not RAM. Ok this is amazing grace we sit and sing songs for everyone. I am born in the USA, so i don't really understand the courtship of the English Ways. But now i do. They take forever in courtly romance, as i sing and dance i love Ram as the power of the sun. Am i overcooked or just underdone. Please tell me what you see, oh yes, Timothy and I and RAM are flawless and we always share our best. How come Timothy writes love songs just like RAM? Am i missing something? Please someone tell me or is just Timothy this talented indeed. Timothy and I just explode into space with our words of loving grace. And love me do is one stunning gorgeous song of love. They both are big loving dolphins that I would love to hug and kiss under the sea in our yellow submarine. You see what i mean the Beatles lyrics just pour thru me naturally, this is odd since i was 100% convinced RAM was Justin Hayward only because ASCAP Id the lyrics to Justin. I think i will free my mind and sing and dance its going to be all right for us to love in the divine lights. Our love has been blooming as one white rose all our lives. And there is nothing wrong with US loving each other and holding each other tight. Well you know that old saying its take two to tango, in the Spanish Mombo. Would i have ever place RAM with Paul, never if nought for this sight that lets you interact with everyone and share your love as the power of the sun. We might as well sail our trysail ships on the seas, because what is, is what shall be. I am not the writer just the pen, but i see where and i see when, we were the best of friends and I’m calling RAM back home again. Lets see in reality what shall be. There are many song by RAM i have listed on this sight.
Amunet Wolfbane will you kindly one day tell me what you see. As i sing here i stand with my heart in my hand, if RAM is gone i can't go on, and he might just sing and dance my way. To hide your love away is not the Lords way for us. But in reality this is all quite a shock to little me. Who has loved a man named RAM but he sang from the wings on the silver golden threads of his eternal heartstrings. What can you sing to love that has spanned the shores of space and time? I am in not any way trying to stretch or bend the truth. This is what happened to us as we.
Being so young, i did not know whom is the shadow hanging over me, when this man RAM comes singing and dancing thru the wings of my immortal soul. I never said no, or Goodbye, I always said yes and Hello, Hello, Hello, i had no idea that i was dealing with a super star, why he had to go, i will never know, as i travel the country byways and cobblestones roads of RAM'S heart and soul. Do we still love each other today, this kind of love and passion never dies its here too stay. Any feedback from you and your friends would be greatly appreciated. There must be a time and place for us somewhere in the seas of US being US. AMEN. AMEN> AMEN.
I can only sing to you this love is heaven sent, we are one branch off the same tree, and this is the only song i can sing to you in harmony and peace. May the Lord bless all our love and keep all of US safe and warm on the shores of peace. Amunet Wolfbane this has been a magically mystery tour de force for me, and lets see if dreams really do come true, i know our love is true, lets see what the next step will be on the shores or reality or should i sing sanity. I can't tell you how all of this happens, it just happened in our day, maybe because RAM and I cross fields in poetry, song writing, and the natural foods industry, we have so many interest in common that it almost seems like a dream. Could he be the man of my dreams, well he never stayed, and look at the truth in today. I am here and he is in another place. What can i say? Ram and Poeticweaver are to the utmost loving and truly in “The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen." who live and sing in perfect harmony. We are all the same, and now that were burning as one flame on the same page, if you have the time maybe you can sing to me what you see in our ebony and ivory keys that seek to be one heart one dream one thread of love singing and dancing thru the heavenly chords of the Lords heart dreams. Why don’t we all sing in the Lords loving themes this is Christ the king and this is what he sings, "I am the light of the world. Whoever follows me will never walk in darkness, but will have the light of life." Maybe I’m amazed at the way he loves me all the time. Maybe I am amazed at the way he really needs US. Maybe he is the only one that can help me understand the meaning of US, and our love. In the seas of the Lords Immortal Plan, Ram is a man i deeply understand, I am in the middle of something that I don’t really understand, and maybe Ram is the only man that can help me understand, maybe he amazes me in all his heartfelt ways, maybe I’m amazed at the way we all can write a song and have it burn as one under the glory of the loving lords new born sun. Maybe I’m amazed that Ram and Poeticweaver ever came my way, it’s the Lords Grace, that brings us such love, and this is what this song is all about, we love each other very much. ~Namaste Blessed Be, Sharron~
Edited on May 19 because ''.
Amunet Wolfbane
May 18, 2005
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Very well done! Beautiful and creative. Flawless! Great job! Blessings, Gypsy
from1chalice
May 13, 2005
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Sharron - you are way too cool!

Boy can you write.

Thanks for this and the pages you will continue to weave with your art,

Chalice.
Sharon Corr
May 13, 2005
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Wonderful Heartfelt Comment!
~CountryCousin my new old friend~
~Thank you deeply for your love and your graceful ways CountryCousin. I was beginning to question my sanity. This is just as hard for me to believe as anyone else. For the simple fact that i am just me. I don't care if i was in the media. I really never saw myself as anyone but just me. I always love to play and have fun. So once upon a time, a lovely man by the name of RAM stopped by to sing to me who and what is the ~Listen to the Dolphins Project~ His letter was witty, beautifully penned i never saw anything like his words in my young life. Sometimes we just know a good thing, and the happiness true love brings. This poet RAM is amazing grace to me. He would write me songs, and i would fly to the skies above. I never experienced such love in my life except from my mother. But this is man, so i know you can deeply understand. At one point in time, i said i have to find out who is RAM. All the channels were jammed and jammed and log jammed. There is a very good reason for this silence. If i had known who is RAM, i think i would have just been so intimated, that i might nought have penned anything. Just the way he knows how to move me is wonderful. In retrospect it was better nought to know in the beginning who is RAM. County Cousin i even went to ASCAP, with 500 songs in my hands. They looked at me, and they looked at the songs, and said oh my Sharron only five men in the world can write this beautifully. I said whom; off the top this is what they said.
1. Ian Anderson
2. John Anderson
3. Jeff Tate
4. Justin Hayward
5. Peter Frampton because of the word RAM.

Then one man said I think this is Paul McCartney, no one even breathed no one said anything. They would not write Paul’s name on the list, as if this would be sacrosanct. As for me i had no clue who is RAM. Well the lyrics came from Hayward California. And they do contain passages from the Moody Blues Songs; ASCAP said to me, the lyrics are Justin Hayward of the Moody Blues. WOW they have never seen anything like this ever. I said how do you really know show me. They said well first Sharron the lyrics are spelled in the United Kingdom English. Which i never saw because when i read them they did not have an accent? LOL! Then they said he left you a clue on the bottom of each page. 'Hayward" now does this make sense to you. It did for the mere fact that i had met Justin and that in itself is a long story. Everything with Justin is above board, no funny stuff. His driver Mac De Priest is from the same town as me, Michigan City Indiana, the last stop to nowhere land. ROTFL... It made common sense because Mac took me to meet Justin, I did not ask to go to the concert, and Mac had to place me in the front row. This was too much. And to top it all off, I said to Mac, you know that song of Justin’s he is looking for a miracle in his life, Mac said yes, well i have the first books on the planet for "The Course In Miracles" i think you should leave this for the group. It seemed at the time to have meaning and synchronicity. I never thought about the Moody Blues again until Justin Hayward’s Name came up again at ASCAP. Then I thought maybe there is a connection with us. In truth the two events are unrelated in time and space. Hard to believe that ASCAP could actually make a mistake. The writer RAM is so brilliant and witty even ASCAP could not figure him out. Or maybe they could not really tell me. I don't know. They did say here is the address of the Moody Blues, and here is the addresses of MPL, why don't you send this to both of them and just see what happens. Being young curious as the cat, i did just that. No answer from MPL, and Justin said I'm not RAM. I've missed many things in my life, but who is too say who is wrong and who is right. I just thought Justin is playing coy, not realizing that he is telling me the truth. If Justin is not RAM. Then who is RAM? Lol.
A magical mystery tour de force for sure. Am i really here? Justin never said anything. Maybe he knew it is for the best. If i were Justin, i would be silent 2. LOL in retrospect he did the proper thing. Mac even read the lyrics and said this is the Moody Blues. Mac travelled with them on the road for over 10 years. I though if anyone he would know. He called Justin, and Justin said to Mac, this man writes similar to me. Now what do you make of that? Even Mac was confused. I gave up. I said whoever RAM may be is from outer space, or inner space, and there is a reason why he does not want to be known. I can see it clearly now. Ram is loving and is a friend to everyone. This is really his inner light and being. CountryCousin this is way way way over my head. First of all i am not in Rock n Roll, although i keep meeting Rock Stars all the time. That is another story. Everyone was nice and above board. Everyone loved just like my industry the natural foods industry. So i felt comfortable with Rock Stars, seeing them as just ordinary people just like you and me. This is their God Given Gift, and it’s a joy to meet each and every one of them. CountryCousin when i was only twenty-one, i was in Southern California, for a natural foods industry trade show. I don't know how, but at some event unrelated to the trade show, we met Mike Luv, from the Beach Boys. Mike is utterly amazing. When he first looked at me he blinked his eyes and came right over to me, and held on to my amethyst crystal necklace around my neck. Mike Luv looked me right in the eyes, and said Sharron you’re a songwriter.. Robert Corr was there! He heard what Mike Luv said, being once of sound mind and body, i thanked Mike Luv, but i said you have the wrong person, i don’t know how to write a song? He just gave me that Mike LUV look; i just laughed not really taking his words seriously. He was serious, and i just assumed he was trying to pick up something about me. I was blind, but now i see. When i look back all the messages that were given to me the miracles the signs the wonders of it all, makes me stop and just breathe. I had enough on my hands with Ginseng RUSH; my plate was full and overflowing. I barely had time to do anything else. Sometimes i listen, sometimes i am tone deaf. Now I really am going to listen to you, and all your bring to me. Someone said to me on this sight, could this man who is RAM be who you are looking for, i said RAM Paul McCartney you have to be kidding. He said maybe. I said no way, not because i don't like Paul, its just the opposite its impossible to believe or conceive, is this a chapter out of Ripley’s Believe it or not. Well Amen seven times seven, RAM IS PAUL and ASCAP made a mistake, am i too early or just too late? Namaste Blessed Be, you tell me what you see, all the best to you and yours, I know when you tell me something it will be the divine truth and I do appreciate you and all you sing and you do in your cerise beauty. I'm lucky to have you on my baseball team, don't want to play all alone, i like being on a team, and i like to play baseball today as yesterday. All the best, Sharron.

9:32 PM
Edited on May 13, 8:51 p.m. because ''.
Sharon Corr
May 13, 2005
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~jthserra~
I am not the writer just the pen.
But I see where and I see when.
You play the song your way
To me this song is fine.
But thank you for you insightful comment.
We all love the Beatles you may be an expert
On every one of their songs, I am nought,
I only have a friend I penn love songs with by the name of RAM,
A deeply loving man, who has a heart of pure gold and tender compassion for everyone under the Lords loving sun.
I don’t know a thing about the Beatles; I will be the first one to tell you so. I had no clue, in the world that RAM could be Paul McCartney. For the simple fact, this is so above me, but I will still sing love is our only need.
We all have our own way.
Perfection is in the eyes of the behold
Now one day older and just a little bit bolder.
Think what you choose, as for me, there is meaning behind the rhythm rhyme,
Never knew whom the poet RAM is until yesterday. Seems a blue dolphin gave me the heavenly news. So Love ME DO, is a wonderful song of love, i deeply agree. If anyone had told me that i was writing with the Beatles, i would have said get the men in the white coats, this is just a lovely man by the name of RAM. LOL, if you don't believe me, it does not matter to me, someone by the name of RAM, sends me love songs, and we go on and on. I was just a child when the Beatles were first featured on the Ed Sullivan Show. My first reaction was, Oh my Paul is the cute one. As i love the man who is ram as the power of the sun. AngelEyes711!
Edited on May 13, 7:51 p.m. because ''.
addicted2nyquil
May 13, 2005
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.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... good poem
CountryCousin
May 13, 2005
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A fine tribute
I liked all of their songs and still do. It was truly classic music and I think that you have contributed your rendition well.
Imokon
May 13, 2005
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That's definitly something from the heart if I ever saw such.
dregs
May 13, 2005
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pretty nice write, the background made my eyes water a bit reading the white, but that inconsequential.

on thing that stood out was
"We can do it in the road we can do it anywhere we can do it in the tub
As I sing rub a dub dub, we can do it anywhere baby AND don't say maybe "
i think, the mood suggests a more playful, "now, don't say maybe"
that nice, sly, suttle smooth-jazz sensuous "now, don't..."

nice write.
jthserra
May 13, 2005
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It seems odd that you'd picture McCartney on a poem title taken from one of George Harrison's best songs, a song Frank Sinatra called the best love song ever. Given the rhythm established in that first line, I recommend you take your lines and try to sing them. The flow seemed off on a number of the lines, perhaps it was jumping from quoting one song to another, but the rhythm just didn't follow the consistency of the rhyme. Read, or sing it outloud and you'll hear it.

jim : )
Bint al Arab
May 13, 2005
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that was really well done
masonhung
May 13, 2005
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lots of love
whoa
thats alot of love
nice poem and a nice collaboration
keep it up
peace
Mason Hung
May 13, 2005
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Well done :)
lovly poem. beautiful tribute to love and the one you love, this was very touching and the style and the rythem of the poem just pulled it together wonderfully enjoyed the poem
fabio telegoriano
May 13, 2005
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authot notes-A+ poem-A
Whale fettishes are cute. i loved the poem. i loved the authors notes better.
Little Feather
May 13, 2005
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love the poem. Never seen author notes so extensive. You must have an amazing love to be so vocal about in such a way as you have shown here in your expression of it. The flow was awesome and I love the title. Thanks for sharing.

God Bless
Tammy
Mickie27
May 13, 2005
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There is such freedom in your words such beauty spilled on the page. I love dolphins they carry so much freedom with them. This is a very special song of love that is both romantic and passionate. Your voice rings through this with true beauty and the freedom that you express is awesome I applaud you my friend.
Anonymous123
May 13, 2005
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Interesting use of the Beatles' lyrics.
Reframing-Quill
May 13, 2005
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Dynamically a masterful Masterpiece
This song and title has always been one of my favourites
And what magic to the matching background. For, the power of love is like the depths of the ocean, boundless, unending, tranquil, rocky-at-times, dangerous, but ever moving and constant..! Your words just flow naturally, as if written in some mountain chalet, before true-love’s fireplace, isolated from the rest of the troubled world. Truly what we need more of is poems like this, which stir the heart to dream and appreciate love’s best.
And I especially love the line: “…Thanks for sharing your love story” and “…Set me free within our souls of destiny.”

Thank you Poeticweaver, and my dear AngelEyes711, this is “as enchanting as the sun glimmering upon the weaves of the sea” with the majestic beauty of the dolphins playing; for that, too, is what love is like.

-Milly ~
poetry within
May 13, 2005
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*wow* I'm taken back really,this is so beautiful. the background and picture are amazingly beautiful and go so well with the poem.

embraced by your words and envloped with
their meanings of love, they lift me up
and like the clouds I feel as if I'm floating above

Edited on May 13, 7:18 because ''.
left
May 13, 2005
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Your words like an untamed stream sweep me off my feet along the bizarre and beautiful reflections of love. Soft scapes of wild and intense passion shifting awareness, shifting blood. And in a shower of bright stars where dreams are born, the dreams are ours. Graciously floating through space and time, unbound by law or rule, we are one in the magnificent aura of love. I hope from this pastel hued dream we never awake.

Chris