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You Are An Unmarked Pill

Like an unmarked pill
You drive me crazy
Spin my head around
I swallow you
My pain increases
Though you mean it to cease
Like with an unmarked pill
I don't know what I'm in for
Death or ecstasy ?
Should I take the risk?
Like An unmarked pill
You leave me guessing
What's left to come our way?
It seems as though we've been through the end of the world
Nothing will ever be the same
Like an unmarked pill
You've killed me!

Author notes

Guess who this is about?
I thought I'd do something, the oposite of his song that he wrote about me.
Written May 12th, 2005

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  • vanfan4
    June 22, 2005
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    I like this! it's both funny and biting. nice contrast on ll 5/6.