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Gone

My world came crashing down
the day I found out your heart was gone
I spoke in tears
Never knowing what will happen next

As the words trembled out my mouth
repeating your name over and over
Praying to God
to answer why this was all gone

My heart with yours
together for life
I love you my love
cry till i can't hold on any longer

Author notes

This is about a boy i really liked that left yesterday and i'm really sad!!!!
Written May 12th, 2005

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  • ForgottenxMe
    June 13, 2005
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    awwwwwwwww this is reall really sweet and very loving...... are you boy sick or someting?!?!?! lol but great poem


  • moonlit-memories
    June 5, 2005
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    this is amazing i love how you say you "spoke in tears". you really captured that feeling of loss.
    thanks for the comment.


  • Forevers Eve9
    May 30, 2005
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    very good

    AWWWWWWWW...Kiara I like this poem i don`t remember read this one the other day At your house....This Isn`t about G.O.? Is it cause then I`m just gonna smack you.J/K That was a really good poem!!! GOOD JOB BUD-Die


  • shouri13
    May 23, 2005
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    HAHA! i know who this is about too hehe i'm not gonna tell though hehe its good though