Think about me with love or hate.
Think about me before its too late.
Think about me before i disappear.
I wish that i could feel you near.
My body is cold, my blood rushing out.
my time is over, please do not pout.
the thin silver blade on the bathtub side.
I'm dieing now all because you lied.
Don't forget about me just remember the past.
Think of me now and make it last.
I'm lying in my tub....blood flowing free.
Just remember...its your fault, you could have saved me.
I'm starting to notice the darkness sweeping over.
I kinda wish i was still sober.
The end is near, i see the white light.
My bleeding gray wrists was my last sight.
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hope u like it
Written May 12th, 2005
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wow Kallie. thats sure a wake up call for someone who hurts ya huh? not only have you read your own soul but others as well. but remember from the darkness there is always light. you just have to find it.
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wo. Thats a wee bit dark. lol nice poem. I like it very spitefull. Other than that i dont really know what esle to say, as i am not very good with the comments. lol
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Wow...I like the flow and rhythm in this poem..Great job hun
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I loved your poem kallie , it was so emotional and effective on the reader, woo hoo awsome job
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so deep yet soo good i luv it
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WOW! awesome poem kallie! love ya
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these were my fav. lines,...
My body is cold, my blood rushing out.
my time is over, please do not pout.
the thin silver blade on the bathtub side.
I'm dieing now all because you lied.
Don't forget about me just remember the past.
Think of me now and make it last.
I'm lying in my tub....blood flowing free.
Just remember...its your fault, you could have saved me.
good oem kallie, i liked it alot! you rhymed and flowed good in this one! anyway, good poem.
VGP!
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yay, not how i really feel! lol
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great
nice poem is this how u really feel or did u make it up either way its great -
I really did enjoy this poem. I like depressing poems! I liked the rhymes. The flow was really nice. I liked the lines:
the thin silver blade on the bathtub side.
I'm dieing now all because you lied.
Just one thing, should "dieing" be dying? Other than that, I really liked this poem!! Keep up the good work in the future!! -
hope u likey!
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