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And when he doffs his cape
It rains in the desert
Washing everything
Down into the gully
Bubbling and churning
Twisting and turning
Mortal blue west
On one knee, north is green
The red are dead
Go for the green
Who knows what I mean

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Written May 12th, 2005

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