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Bound to Fate

Forced to grow up
A life inside her grows
So much anger and pain inside
That only she knows
Falling for second best
Just to quell the lonliness
Her affections
Slowly digress
Her heart belongs to another
And yet she feigns love the one she is now bound
She follows kicking and screaming
Not making a sound
Already doom has marked them
They fall apart
This is not the way
For a new life to start
Think of your child
He needs love or he will grow up cold
He needs to know love is gained
Not sold

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Written May 12th, 2005

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  • Mia Donna
    May 13, 2005
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    Ooo wow. Powerful. Enjoyed reading this.


  • May 12, 2005
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    Wow hon, very powerful statments here and very well written, your choice of superb
    And yet she feigns love the one she is now bound
    She follows kicking and screaming
    Not making a sound
    Already doom has marked them
    very forceful, and deep feelings, well done sweetie! All the best, Love, Annie