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Waiting..........

Waiting to log onto the internet
Wanting to hear from you
If there is no mail from your addy again
I really don't know what I'll do

I write, and I write
Sometimes I think too much
At times you write back
Wanting to keep in touch

You love me you say
Waiting for me to respond
I finally admit it back
Now it seems like you are gone

You call me your girlfriend
But only in private
Can't let others know
Wouldn't want to blow it

You talk with every
Other chick in the chat
But one guy says hi to me
And you ask what's up with that?

Maybe you just needed
Your ego stroked
Knowing that I do not easily
Fall for online blokes

A feather in your cap
That's the impression I get
FYI...Everytime we cybered
I faked it!

It was a fun couple of months
But you live so far away
I am a safety net for you
To keep some other chicks at bay

If you're not online tonight
You can shove your little game
I'll let you know that tomorrow
If I see your name


I'll be here all day.......

Author notes

A little from column A....a little from column B
Not really personal, but sort of.....

(Not one of my best, but......)
Written November 17th, 2002

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  • April 1, 2004
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    ahhhh online romance, have had some and it always turns crazy. the games and the waiting, the cybering as you roll another cigarette lol
    laughed my head off at that picture in the list of poems section

  • Willow
    March 3, 2004
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    great

    I have had a couple of friends be the unwitting victims of on-line lotharios. This poem summed them all up in one wonderful piece. What is this world coming to?

  • Kelley
    November 19, 2002
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    excellent

    i loved the faking it...lol...that was great


  • Barbara gold member
    November 18, 2002
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    This is maybe 40% personal..the rest is gathered from other 'relationships' I have seen transpire online


  • rainy
    November 18, 2002
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    neutral

    I hope this isn't personal. Don't even let anyone treat you this way. You have to have enough confidence in yourself and feel good about youself. Online or not, don't let anyone treat you this way.


  • finding myself 84
    November 17, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Hey there... I enjoyed it...

  • Barbara gold member
    November 17, 2002
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    Ummm...I musta been sleeping in class the day you covered this topic.

    Actually, I thought this up after listening to someone whine last night...not me, though, I NEVER whine....I just bitch and complain! And borrowed from my own experiences.

    It DID remind me of a couple guys I have know through the years.

    LOL@the faking it line......it amuses me to no end, people wanting to have text sex


  • TanyaB
    November 17, 2002
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    excellent

    *smacks Lill upside the head* did i not teach you anything???

    ok now for a little sympathy...(HUGS) + (Godiva chocolates)

    ok now where's the basTURD i'll kick his sorry little ass for hurting my friend (me thinks Babbling_Brook will have to make an appearance and kick some 30s butt!)

    (i did like the 'faking it' line lol)

  • Barbara gold member
    November 17, 2002
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    Internet Games should be an Olympic event! This is sorta based on me, but I elaborated certain aspects. Some of it is true......


  • Unbridled1
    November 17, 2002
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    excellent

    this made me giggle...not at you...but at the truth of this...and the games people play online. Just remember to keep it in check and enjoy it for what it's worth...but never put much stock in it. :)

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